Alright human Sunset is a lot less of an asshole now knowing that she was actually just lonely and felt like she was being punished when all she was trying to do in the beginning was be nice(and get freaky) Fuck that school and her pops for their reaction. I got a feeling the next time they 'go at it' Indy is gonna show Sunset a dominant side thats gonna turn her entire world on its head. Great chapter, good feels and surprisingly funny
Congratulations to this chapter, I liked it a lot even if I expected that Sunset and Indigo approached in another way (if you remember in my previous comment I said Indigo's goggles would have played a key role) but I really liked this too Version you wrote. I just want to ask you one question: the next chapter will still focus on Sunset and Indigo? Because in the title there is written part 4 so I have to deduce that they will still be the protagonists? However still compliments for the story. You continue to go great!
Alright human Sunset is a lot less of an asshole now knowing that she was actually just lonely and felt like she was being punished when all she was trying to do in the beginning was be nice(and get freaky) Fuck that school and her pops for their reaction. I got a feeling the next time they 'go at it' Indy is gonna show Sunset a dominant side thats gonna turn her entire world on its head. Great chapter, good feels and surprisingly funny
Aww, that turned out kinda sweet. And we get a nice lead in to the next story.
Congratulations to this chapter, I liked it a lot even if I expected that Sunset and Indigo approached in another way (if you remember in my previous comment I said Indigo's goggles would have played a key role) but I really liked this too Version you wrote. I just want to ask you one question: the next chapter will still focus on Sunset and Indigo? Because in the title there is written part 4 so I have to deduce that they will still be the protagonists? However still compliments for the story. You continue to go great!
That's was she thinks.
if sunny flare and lemon zest arent together id kinda love to see that threesome lol
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Who said we're done? We're only halfway through this tale.
How appropriate,
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I beg to differ by the way she reacted with lemon zest however I think she still in the closet about it