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First,
At this point, she would’ve been happy to accept defeat if it meant she could get that damned girl out of her head. It seemed like every time she closed her eyes all she could see was Shimmer with her sultry, rosy lips curled into that tantalizing little smirk. And those eyes, so vibrant and radiant; they were equal parts terrifying and alluring, like they could strip down every layer of her defenses and expose the very heart of her soul.
Where the hell did this come from? There was no indication that Indigo found Sunset attractive before now. Second,
She once more donned that wicked smirk of hers before wedging the plastic caution sign underneath the door handle, jamming the door shut. This brought about a moment of surprise for Indigo, but she didn’t have time to react. Sunset stepped up to her again, grabbed her by the head, and then pulled her in for a deep and lustful kiss.
Again, where did this come from? Completely, outta left field. But at least, I can chalk it up to angry sex, but it's a start. Right now, they are, at most, rivals-with-benefits. Finally,
“Okay. I was on the countertop and then Sunset was slipping them off. She held them in her hands and then—” Her thoughts and heart froze as the realization sank in. “And then she shoved them into her pocket.”
Looks like Sunset got herself a trophy after all. Now, Indigo has to somehow earn her own trophy. She better get to researching.
Can I say that this turnaround of events did not expect me right? However great work with this story. The interaction between Indigo and Sunset I like a lot, even if such a turn would be nice between Rainbow and Aria (well, let's just say I'm out of bed). Anyway I hope to see a new chapter as soon as possible and see how the Sunset and Indigo relationship evolves, and I do not know why, but I have the impression that the Indigo goggles will make a difference between these two, given the affective value they have for Indigo . And after this poem I end by saying that I like this story more and more and I congratulate you for the work you are doing.
Please tell me this was a reference to that moment in Dragon Ball Z Abridged when Vegeta and Bulma are screaming at each other and they basically do this exact same thing only with insults before saying Fuck you? Cause OMFG this story is gonna be a top favorite for me if it is xD
In retrospect, there was probably some subconscious influence, but that had not been my intention. Still, wouldn't be the first time something like that has slipped in.
8146896 it took a minute for it to click in my head cause i was rereading the chapter during an episode of Dragon Ball Super and I then got into an 'arguement' with my friend and we were like
fuck you
fuck you!
FUCK YOU<insert slur here>
and i was reading and i was like...wait a second?! lol
Hahaha damn! Human Sunset has no chill...Indigo needs to gain some dominance cause damn that was hot. Great chapter
8139475 you sir are a twisted genius ya know that?
Warning: The following comment contains spoilers. Read at you own risk.
First,
Where the hell did this come from? There was no indication that Indigo found Sunset attractive before now.
Second,
Again, where did this come from? Completely, outta left field. But at least, I can chalk it up to angry sex, but it's a start. Right now, they are, at most, rivals-with-benefits.
Finally,
Looks like Sunset got herself a trophy after all. Now, Indigo has to somehow earn her own trophy. She better get to researching.
8145058 Indigo isn't gonna go down without a fight...but then again thats what Sunset wants huh? For Indigo to fight for her 'torphy'
Can I say that this turnaround of events did not expect me right? However great work with this story. The interaction between Indigo and Sunset I like a lot, even if such a turn would be nice between Rainbow and Aria (well, let's just say I'm out of bed). Anyway I hope to see a new chapter as soon as possible and see how the Sunset and Indigo relationship evolves, and I do not know why, but I have the impression that the Indigo goggles will make a difference between these two, given the affective value they have for Indigo . And after this poem I end by saying that I like this story more and more and I congratulate you for the work you are doing.
I think you just caused a forest fire.
Because this was HOT!!!
Please tell me this was a reference to that moment in Dragon Ball Z Abridged when Vegeta and Bulma are screaming at each other and they basically do this exact same thing only with insults before saying Fuck you? Cause OMFG this story is gonna be a top favorite for me if it is xD
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In retrospect, there was probably some subconscious influence, but that had not been my intention. Still, wouldn't be the first time something like that has slipped in.
8146896 it took a minute for it to click in my head cause i was rereading the chapter during an episode of Dragon Ball Super and I then got into an 'arguement' with my friend and we were like
fuck you
fuck you!
FUCK YOU<insert slur here>
and i was reading and i was like...wait a second?! lol
ouch i just got burned cuz that was hot. one of the best eqg sex scenes i have ever read