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Prince Galaxy
Hello!Prince Galaxy, leader of the Galaxial Empire and also writer and drawer, pleasure to meet you!
Prince Galaxy
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I would love to know what a "bocus of gol" is.
8113224
Bocus d'or, it's, I'm pretty sure a European cooking award.Bromze, silver, gold.
The fuck just happened?
8113247
Gotta go fest
Wow. This is garbage. Though I commend this filth for not stinking as much as others.
Still, this left me cringing in every form of the word.
Not the worst here, but I still wanted to put forks into my corneas as I read.
... welp, at least it was a short chapter.
8113254
Progress! ;p
8113254
What didn't you like about it?
8113378
Will do, thx!
8114115 It's just that the main protag is trying to be cool and strong, but she instead gives off this really edgy attitude. She's a marysue, as well, being a literal god and killing all the guards with ease.
That's not how you develop a character. Making it OP as shit isn't a good move to do. Like, this isn't an rp, this is a story website, where you post coherent stories, not about how unkillable your character is without reason.
EDIT: Also, why are the guards doing such shady shit? There is no reason nor rhyme to it. It just feels so out of place that it too makes me cringe and think "how the hell did this story get created again?".
8114659
Gang, not guards, guards come in later, also, rewriting the story, thx for the advice!
8113378
So how about now?
8114933
Ok, so, better reason for the school
And less moron science. No, I'm so keeping that. That is prime quality knowledge, everybody should know it. Nah, I'll deal with it, but how should I get a reason for the school (I have no idea and my imagination and creative juices have been depleted.)
Thx!
8114997
You know what, she sensed magic in her, so, that's the best I got, and I will approve!
Now for the questioning...Huh...Maybe less swearing...Wait, the fucking fuck shit am I fucking talking about, GET ME THREE SHOTS OF WHISKEY. No, maybe less swearing, ummm, any idea of were she goes completely quantum physics:
"So, basically, thssis is why we can't build better computers, because our buttons work by blocking electrons, so, If and that is, the quantum physics will make the electron teleport to the other side which will break your computer, the more you know, facts"
Or:
"YOU MOTHER****ING ************ ****** *** SUCKING ******"
I'm twelve and know about this stuff, the wonders of the internet.
8115092 I was about to ask why this user was banned but then I looked at the comments and... Yea. Although if it's because of age, there's no real way to prove it. If it's because of his/her outbursts that makes sense.
8116541 People tend to either say that on purpose or just act up but I guess it changes little. How long is he/she banned?
8116746 Then it can be anywhere from a day to a year
8116785 How unfortunate. Since there's no clear cut proof he/she can offer up.