The Multiverse. It is a strange place in which there are worlds where things taste like purple and two plus two equals fish and if you divide that by three you get salmon... truly a weird place.
As Midnight Sparkle began to tear holes in reality in her mad desire to understand magic, one portal opens up to Canterlot, and unnoticed by Sunset Shimmer, Princess Celestia watched on. Watching her once power obsessed student become a hero.
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It's pretty good, this would've been a good deleted scene idea in the Equestria Girls- Friendship Games where one of the tears into Equestria with Princess Celestia seeing both Sunset Shimmer and Midnight Sparkle are battling it out.
Though I do wonder if Celestia would be worrying about Princess Twilight Sparkle ending up like human Twilight's transformation into Midnight Sparkle. 
8116207 That thought actually did spring to my own mind as well.
8116230 One or just both of them?
8116262 Both actually. As I wrote this, I thought "If twilight hadn't become Celestia's student, or Something unexpected happened, could she have turned out like the Human Twilight?"
8116277 Honestly, I think it could go either way when I've seen some people on here that would like the see Twilight and/or her friends become the antagonist villain (probably embracing their darker selves) from being at a breaking point of no return or something like that.
Though I did see Twilight used dark magic a couple of times before on a couple of episodes, so like I said it could go either way.
8116305 Even Celestia demonstrated Dark Magic to Twilight once if my memory serves me
8116317 That's correct. In the first part of the Crystal Empire, Celestia did demonstrated Twilight one dark magic when after she told her 'If hatred and fear take hold'. Basically to me, I thought it won't be the first and last I've seen dark magic again. There's bound to be more of it pop up out of nowhere in the near weeks or months on the show or movies.
8116348 I just updated the story a little with a few minor changes, thanks to a friend of mine who went over the story with me in google docs.
I LOVE THIS STORY, please say you have a sequel in the works for it, I just got to know what Sunset will say or do when she see's that entry from Princess Celestia.
8118047 Honestly speaking this was just an idea that kinda just came to me one day and would not leave me be till I did something with it. I Suppose I could try and think something up for a sequel. Or if anyone else would like to write a follow up, I would be more then happy to allow it,
I agree. This really could have been in the actual movie! Well done on your first story, sister (or... brother).
This wasn't bad, but it feels...unpolished. Bare-boned. Bare minimum, it'd be a good idea if Celestia gave some reason for not helping when others' lives are at stake.
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I am unsure what else I could have done to be honest,
In my defense it was my first story, and my goal was to keep true to the movie while adding in a what if. In this case the what if being Celestia watching from one of Rifts.
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Fair enough. Still, it seems kinda cold to stand back and do nothing while others' lives are in danger. Her being proud of Sunset Shimmer is perfectly fine, and in-character, but Celestia isn't the sort to sit back and do nothing when she sees someone who needs help.
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out of curiosity, what would you have done? how would you have done it?
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Well, I'd have it pretty much the way you did, but I'd have Celestia do more than simply sit back and be passive about it. Have her order some Royal Guards to keep watch and be at the ready in case someone fell through the holes in the fabric of reality, for one thing.
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Huh, you make a good point there.
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I do try to present sensible arguments. Most of the time I even succeed.
I do wonder what Sunset's reply is though.
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I never thought that much about it really, but I'd like to think they continued to write each other and eventually visited each other
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It'd still be nice to see what Sunset's reply is.
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I'd have her try to go through the rift and bounce off, realizing that they are one-way rifts only.
This was very fluffy.
Nice work.
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Thanks! It had been something in my head that I just had to try and write
10105021
That's how all my stories start too.
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I have other ideas too, but no clue how to actually fully implement them. Such as one that takes place duing the episode "Bats" in which when Twilight goes to fix Fluttershy, she sneezes right as she casts her spell. As a result instead of fixing Fluttershy, she turns all of Ponyville into batponys. (non Feral)
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That could be really amusing to read.
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Actually I forgot one "small" detail. One pony in ponyville DIDNT get changed into a bat pony, and that was because she was out of town. Spoiled Rich, who returns to town the following morning to a seemingly deserted town, totally unaware of what happened. Interestingly she also has a huge bat phobia
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I would read that. 
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I actually DID have an old start to it on my old pc, but it (the pc) got fried in a powerouttage a lil before last Halloween lol. So I'd have to start from scratch
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thanks!
Quite lovely. I do enjoy it.
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thanks!
And luckily she did celestia.
Twilight is sure gonna be surprised when she finds out that celestia did this.
Lovely Story. I really enjoy the concept of Sunset and Celestia's reconciliation.