It seems SUPER DUMB of the Alicorns that they choose Cadence to wear down Dim Dark, when they already know Luna would have the strongest connection and best choice of words!
Is Luna's astral self out of commission from the psychic echo? or maybe Is luna unwilling to deal with the emotional stress of facing Dim Dark for personal reasons?
six legged demon spawn. if it had two more it would be odin's steed.
though i do wonder why so many stories depict demons as evil, or at least absolute evil. could there be demons who are simply dark and cranky and not sombe cessfilled abomination?
8132065 In that story it said "Teufiel (not correct spelling I'm sure) Spawn" are born of ponies and demons. Presumably there are (while not hordes of them) at least a fair few, given they are ageless and extremely hard to kill (as in; crush their heart between two plates of cold iron and douse in holy water or they regen in full from almost literally anything.) So Blank Page (was that her name? Not sure...) isn't necessarily Dim's older half-sister.
Interesting I can see how this story would be harder to write. Most of your stories don't stay dark the whole way there is some up and down not so much here
It's odd. It feels like he should die in a blaze of Dark Glory. A hero in the eyes of the beholder, but honestly not someone ever deserving of such a title.
And god damn. A talent to bring light to darkness? Wonder how that would've worked out. I wonder, Twilight Velvet was a no, and Dim Dark was a no... how many others where a no where Twilight succeed.
Hang in there - you're doing a wonderful job. Make sure to take time for yourself, and remember: sweets keep you sweet and chocolate keeps you cheerful!
So we had Tarnish use the words of a Kind des Krieges before and soon we will get to see what an actual one can do. I wonder just how strong the blood of the War Maiden is when it's set to a boil. I'm actually starting to feel a little sorry for the bandits and we haven't really met them yet.
8133139 you nailed it right on the head. "Worse fate". Some characters are really cheated out of a nice glorious death. Damn people and their fucking forgiveness.
Of all the latest Weedverse stories in the last 3-4 months, this and Winterbreak are my favorites.
This has very dark and dismal overtones and an anti-hero who is pushing all the right buttons for me. Personally, I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. We're may get lots of action or simply cut to the resolution after the action where we find out the cost of Dim's violence. (And yes, I'm pretty sure there will be violence.)
I hope you feel better soon, I can understand why this must be hard to write.
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And was featured in Princess Twilight Sparkle's School for Fantastic Foals.
Those soldiers done fucked up
Despite a difficult opening this has been an interesting tale. I'm looking forward to seeing how it all comes together.
You mean she (forgot her name) was BORN that way, and not made such through Tartarusian crucibles?
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Uh, I have no idea what you mean.
It seems SUPER DUMB of the Alicorns that they choose Cadence to wear down Dim Dark, when they already know Luna would have the strongest connection and best choice of words!
Is Luna's astral self out of commission from the psychic echo?
or maybe
Is luna unwilling to deal with the emotional stress of facing Dim Dark for personal reasons?
I'm getting a Dwayne Johnson - Welcome to the Jungle vibe about to happen to the these protection grifters.
Boom shakalacka!
PS...and don't do drugs kids.
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Luna has to deal with dreamers, and such work is exhausting. Cadance was given a homework assignment to help hone her astral skills.
It is a matter of practicality. Luna cannot be in the dream realm and the astral realm at the same time.
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the one in that one story you wrote hold on a sec
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/341907/blank
yeah the succubus demon pony MUST be the one spawned by Dim's mother! You never write coincidences!
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No I don't. Be on the lookout for a story called Impire.
six legged demon spawn.
if it had two more it would be odin's steed.
though i do wonder why so many stories depict demons as evil, or at least absolute evil. could there be demons who are simply dark and cranky and not sombe cessfilled abomination?
8132065
In that story it said "Teufiel (not correct spelling I'm sure) Spawn" are born of ponies and demons. Presumably there are (while not hordes of them) at least a fair few, given they are ageless and extremely hard to kill (as in; crush their heart between two plates of cold iron and douse in holy water or they regen in full from almost literally anything.) So Blank Page (was that her name? Not sure...) isn't necessarily Dim's older half-sister.
Interesting I can see how this story would be harder to write. Most of your stories don't stay dark the whole way there is some up and down not so much here
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Written Word.
Eventually, it is Princess Cadance who figures out the connection and informs Dim that he is not alone. He is overjoyed.
8132191 Nah, you should read Blank.
The six-legged demon is Written Word, a tiufel spawn. You should definitely read it, it's really good.
Take your time to get the next chapter out
It's odd. It feels like he should die in a blaze of Dark Glory. A hero in the eyes of the beholder, but honestly not someone ever deserving of such a title.
And god damn. A talent to bring light to darkness? Wonder how that would've worked out. I wonder, Twilight Velvet was a no, and Dim Dark was a no...
how many others where a no where Twilight succeed.
If you are going for legit German here, 'zauberer' is a noun and therefore needs to be upper case.
8132028 Nah. Doing their job, like any soldiers. They just chose the wrong place at the wrong time.
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Whoops, thank you.
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A worse fate is suffered. He lives and is forced to cope with everything.
Hang in there - you're doing a wonderful job. Make sure to take time for yourself, and remember: sweets keep you sweet and chocolate keeps you cheerful!
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You're welcome. Always happy to help.
If there's any German you need checked, especially entire sentences and such, just PM.
So we had Tarnish use the words of a Kind des Krieges before and soon we will get to see what an actual one can do. I wonder just how strong the blood of the War Maiden is when it's set to a boil. I'm actually starting to feel a little sorry for the bandits and we haven't really met them yet.
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Yeah, but with Tarnish, that was a misunderstanding.
8133139 you nailed it right on the head. "Worse fate". Some characters are really cheated out of a nice glorious death.
Damn people and their fucking forgiveness.
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It's not all bad.
Blackbird Coffyn makes things a little easier.
8133391 SON OF A BITCH!!!!
I read it via email and was cheated a spoiler bar...
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Mwahahahahahahah my evil little black heart rejoices and needs rum.
I can't help but wonder if there's a relationship here with certain rainbow that Sumac has half of?
Of all the latest Weedverse stories in the last 3-4 months, this and Winterbreak are my favorites.
This has very dark and dismal overtones and an anti-hero who is pushing all the right buttons for me. Personally, I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. We're may get lots of action or simply cut to the resolution after the action where we find out the cost of Dim's violence. (And yes, I'm pretty sure there will be violence.)
Just finished reading Blank
How is the actual demon the nicest member of the family?
I love the German you're injecting into the story. It makes sense, somehow.