An Evening with Flurry Heart

TSolving the Mystery
MLP: FiM
Romance
Comedy
Mystery
Slice of Life
Caught off-guard that their nice Flurry Heart can transform into a pony hybrid, Sunset Shimmer and Twilight Sparkle sit down with Shining Armor and Cadence to discuss and theorise how this could have possibly come about.
Shining Armor
Sunset Shimmer
Dean Cadance
Sci-Twi
Flurry Heart
MySisterBroughtMeHere · 4k words · 26 0 · 1.7k views

This story is a sequel to Into the Sunset

(An entry into allykitty's contest). Time and again, the human Twilight Sparkle has expressed the desire for her and her wife Sunset Shimmer to have children, but Sunset has constantly voiced unease with the idea. When Twilight finally learns why, she takes matters into her own hands and volunteers herself and Sunset to babysit their niece Flurry Heart for one evening. However, a complication arises.

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Rose Quill

Rose Quill #1 · Apr 19th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Very nice! I like this story, and it fits nicely into the characterizations of my stories. Have a like, an upvote, and a saved to the guest writer shelf!

Harmony light

Harmony light #2 · Apr 20th, 2017 · 1 · ·

This is fantastic I love seeing sunset in a motherly/ parental situation

Shadowlord

Shadowlord #3 · Jun 9th, 2017 · 1 · ·

As Fluttershy, Applejack and Pinkie Pie often tell me, nothing's more suitable to be watched by children than an animated Disney classic.

Well said! What do Rarity and Rainbow say?

Shadowlord

Shadowlord #4 · Jun 9th, 2017 · 1 · ·

I think I can explain what happened to Flurry, Sunset and Flurry connected in a very particular way a connection most of us spend our whole lives looking for, Sunset realized she loves Flurry and wants to protect her no matter what and this caused a bit of magic to sprout out of Sunset and into Flurry. In other words, though she may not know it, Sunset shared her magic with Flurry to keep her safe, this magic, however, doesn't come from any horn or magic charm, no this magic comes from deep within.

ClosetBrony

ClosetBrony #5 · Apr 24th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Nice and comfy story. Thanks for creating and sharing.

ScisetShimmerEvan

ScisetShimmerEvan #6 · Sep 22nd, 2021 · 1 · ·

Sunset cut her off from explaining herself further with a kiss to the cheek as she pulled the chair next to Twilight out from under the table and sat down on it. "It's okay, Twilight. I know you. You, my sunshine, are not one to let things go, and unless there's a good reason to, I'm not going to stop you from doing it."

Good for you sunset.

"I understand, Sunset," Twilight spoke, feeling the overwhelming tumult of emotions flooding through her. "But you're not alone in this. A lot of people had to learn how to be parents on their own and they do just fine. And don't forget, you have my mom to ask as well. You know she's said you're a daughter to her."

Exactly, what twilight says is true.

But little did she know at that time, all her readiness was to go out the window the moment they reached Shining Armor and Cadence's home, got out of the car, and walked up to the front door to ring the bell. Shining Armor had greeted them, an expression of worry written on his face. He told them that Cadence was having an attack of the nerves. That was all Twilight needed to hear as she dashed in to find her sister-in-law. Shining Armor and Sunset waited in the living room, as Flurry Heart played near them, both watching the ticking clock with concern.

Poor cadence.

"Better?" Sunset exclaimed incredulously. "You're leaving me to look after Flurry Heart alone while you're lending support to her full-grown adult mother. How is that better?"

Ok now I see why sunset is pissed and I wouldn't blame her 1 bit.

"Take her up to the nursery. Put her in the crib and turn on the radio to play ballet music in order to relax her."

Huh, since when did flurry like that.

Sunset removed the chosen film from its spot when a sudden uproar split through the household. Clapping her free hand to her ear, she barged back into the living room. There, Flurry Heart was fiddling around with the remote, giggling angelically as she alternately pushed on the 'next channel' and 'volume up' buttons. Groaning, Sunset stomped over to the sofa and snatched the remote away, turning the volume down significantly and switching the channel to the Bluray player. A quiet sniffle dragged her away from looking at what she was doing as she circled to see Flurry Heart in the throes of beginning to cry. All her anger quickly forgotten, Sunset hurried to think of ways to make her happy.

Phew, that was too close.

Sunset and Twilight looked to Cadence with concern. The former dean, now principal of Crystal Prep, opened the door all the way for them to see. Sunset and Twilight stepped inside and gaped at the scene they had just walked into. Shining Armor was standing in the middle of the room with his arms stretched out in their air to their fullest length. Just out of reach of his fingertips, having absolute fun, was Flurry Heart. Sunset and Twilight's eyes widened in disbelief as they gazed up at their airborne niece, and at the pair of snowy white wings unfolding from her back, and at the pony ears peeking out from her hair, and the horn that was protruding from her forehead.

Wow, I did not see that one coming.

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