Daring Do and the Temple of Chicomoztoc

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The time has finally come for A. K. Yearling to sit down and immortalise the latest in Daring Do’s long line of adventures. However, like any other story, she couldn't possibly publish them as is.

Sometimes they just need a few, minor... adjustments.

Originally written in the week after Strange than Fanfiction aired, and forgotten for unknown reasons/too afraid to post it.

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cAnonym

cAnonym #1 · Apr 15th, 2017 · 1 · ·

...Drapes?

Sollace

Sollace #2 · Apr 15th, 2017 · 1 · ·

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Drapes, like curtains. A name picked totally at random, it's not really supposed to make sense. But at least she got into the book!

Flufux

Flufux #3 · Apr 15th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Hmmmm...okay...Quibble is a...cat?

I guess it makes sense...

Kinda...

Sollace

Sollace #4 · Apr 15th, 2017 · 1 · ·

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Kinda...

Wait, is it supposed to make sense?

Flufux

Flufux #5 · Apr 15th, 2017 · 3 · ·

8098043 Probably not...but it was still fun to read.

Flash Notion

Flash Notion #6 · Apr 16th, 2017 · 1 · ·

why doesn't this have more views? it's perfect!

superfun

superfun #7 · Apr 19th, 2017 · 3 · ·

I love the fact that RD takes more issue with the fact that her last name was changed to Drapes for the story, and not that Quibble was turned into a cat.

dragonjek

dragonjek #8 · Apr 26th, 2017 · 3 · ·

Quibbles doesn't even warrant being a pony.

...

I like it.

Eroraf86

Eroraf86 #9 · May 3rd, 2018 · 3 · ·

Rainbow Drapes.

Quibble the cat.

A.K., you cheeky bastard. Never change.

Zubric

Zubric #10 · Jan 15th, 2019 · · ·

So when watching the episode when it got to the scene the treasure part I was like “all this effort for a stupid tiny box quote

Sollace

Sollace #11 · Jan 15th, 2019 · · ·

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Huh?

Zubric

Zubric #12 · Jan 15th, 2019 · · ·

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F sorry I fixed it now it is readable

Sollace

Sollace #13 · Jan 15th, 2019 · · ·

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Oh, okay.

Yeah, it was. Must've been an expensive little box.

LightningStrike34

LightningStrike34 #14 · Jan 25th, 2021 · 1 · ·

“Well, well, well.” The deep and menacing, yet soothingly charismatic, voice of Daring Do’s arch nemeses— Caballeron— sounded from the far right. “How fortunate, that we would meet like this.” His deep southern accent added a mist of attractiveness overtop the pervading swatch of arrogance.

*nemesis

“Oh, silly Rainbow,” Caballeron cooed, shaking his head. He returned his handkerchief to his coat pocket. “The temple of Chicomoztoc is somewhere in this jungle. Once I find it the Seven Sided Chest is as good as mine. All that is missing is the Amulet of Culiacan, and I only need to wait for Daring Do to come save you and bring it right into my clutched!” He cackled maniacally, running a hoof through his mane. “Now please, scream all you want, and get this under way.”

*clutches

The four guards nodded, flashing salutes, and took up strategic positions around the clearing, one at each of the four directions, and facing away from their captives. Caballeron, satisfied, gave a quick node. He turned around; waving the other guards to follow him as he slowly left the clearing to enter the shadows beyond. “This way, let us allow this to play out to its... eventual conclusion.” Cebelleron’s laughter was the last thing heard as he, with the remaining guards, trudged out into the jungle leaving Rainbow and her companion alone with the four burly guards.

*Caballeron's

Cabeleron trotted ahead with a brisk pace, and his guards stuck to Rainbow on either side. One pulled her roughly from the front, using the ropes as a make-shift reign to keep her moving. Another two picked up the back and would kick Rainbow in the shins if she lingered.

*Caballeron

Aside from a few mistakes, this story is great. 7.5/10

Sollace

Sollace #15 · Jan 26th, 2021 · · ·

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Thanks! And typos fixed! Thanks again.

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