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I can see the king and Prince not having a happy ending
Premise of the story is good but it need some massive editing...
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To be honest this is one of the stories I just use when I can't think for my other stories
I can see a gelding in there very near future and life in chain maybe manual labor in a line some where with no access to females meaning all male staff watching over them
This is getting crazy good the king and prince are get what's coming to them and then some this trial is to against them why they put up a fight is beyond me but genius
Welp, finally made it to the end. I only have one thing to say really:
Please, for the love of all that is good, GET AN EDITOR!! Or at the very least put it through a grammar correction program before posting it here. I'd hoped after nearly 2 years of writing this story the grammar would get better, and I admit it has but only a little. So many misspelled words and incorrect usage of words, makes it difficult to read at times.
Aside from that, ignoring the quite glaring grammar problems, this story has been an enjoyable read. I look forward to what happens next.
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To be honest I just write these chapters when I don't want to work on the others. It is a story I write when I can't think of anything good.
I really like the story, but I need to put this through grammarly. I’m not a grammar nazi, but this story needs an editor.