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Is there succubus transformation story with personality changes?

I don't know if it is just me or not but seems just a bit rushed but, hey who am I to judge.

you are absolutely nobody in that ragard

Voice in my head?

You want to judge someone on their work when you rush and can't even produce a story close in quality to this one.YOU ARE HORRIBLE!

I KNOW:flutterrage::fluttercry::pinkiecrazy:

BE ASHAMED!

^My day to day life

Oooh. Can't wait to see more! Fav and tracking this!

Super excited for this. Favoriting!

So Rainbow is pulling a Cadence.

There is a part of the succubus myth that's kinky: The succubus doesn't get pregnant, but can use the sperm of their male partners to impregnate a female. Use your imagination there.:trollestia:

Loving where this is going~

I wonder how long this story will last?

8059027 I don't know about you, but I like to see them get giant with their titties. Plus, the girls are sexy already. And sexier when their boobs grow.

I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

nice work cantwait for the next chapter.:heart::twilightsmile:

i love bimbos that are not mentaly retarded

Oh come on, now that she's satisfied Twilight won't be as distracted. Right now she should reach around Rainbow's neck as if to hug her and unclasp the amulet and teleport to the other side of the room.

I see some twidash and I love it :pinkiecrazy:

haven't read about scissoring in a long time, I like that a lot!

Great story that has me hoping the magic can "infect" other mares who get as intimate as Twilight did. That being said, I noticed two minor errors:

“Good,” Rainbow Dash quickly grabbed Thunderlane by the hand and practically dragged him to the nearest storage room. She closed the door behind them and locked it before pushing him against the wall. Thunderlane hardly had time to catch his breath before Dash pulled him into a deep kiss, their tongues wrestling with each other as they began to make out. It didn’t take long for Thunderlane’s hands to wonder. Dash had an almost electric feeling of arousal as she felt her partner’s hands caressing the curvature of her hips before moving around and groping at her rear.

Should be changed to "wander"

Rainbow Dash approached Twilight’s house with a stagger in her steps. Although that swagger was hiding an inner nervousness about what she was planning.

Is it a stagger or a swagger?

Interesting, though it might benefit from a bit more foreplay. Also for an anthro story, I noticed that there are no references to horns or wings, which seemed odd. But, like I said, still an interesting story.

Um, by now Twilight should have returned to her senses and realized what the amulet is, or at least what it could be. She should be actively tracking down Rainbow Dash by now. Given her skills with magic I'm surprised she hasn't found Dash yet.

8200535 Or she is melting down entirely, after all, sex with one's best friend could cause a feedback loop. Particularly in Twilight who is panic prone if she is somehow responsible.
Or she woke is going to be doing something. Becoming Scubby Queen Dashies' first victim! :pinkiecrazy:

I can forsee this ending one of two ways. Either rainbow will overcome the temptation and destroy the amulet, or become the new succubus queen

I have a feeling by the end of this story Rainbow Dash would be pregnant.

So what is going to happen in the next chapter?

Needs a futa tag dude. just helpful for those who aren't into that

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Added. I usually remember to tag everything but it was late when I posted this. Guess my sleep-deprived mind assumed that since we've had both male/female and female/female that futa/female wouldn't really be that shocking.

Won't the amulet's powers have already entered in the Bearers of Harmony's essence and Element?

Kinda hoping that, if the mind effects get reversed, the curves don't. #bustyrainbowdash

The latest twist is offbeat, and a bit nasty. If there's that kind of power involved, one has to wonder if the rest of the girls will even be recognizable by the time this ends.

Aww but I want to see rainbow dash full transformation into succubus:pinkiesad2:, why'd you has to do that?

This is just a suggestion but maybe you can do an alternate ending to also appease people who wanted rainbow to actually succeed.

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I might do that if the demand is high enough, we'll have to see.

I'm not the best at dark endings though.

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Oh I would absolutely love to see an alternate ending if you're up to it!

Is there any way you can send a link to the full cover picture

I would to see Rainbow transform

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The artist is Suirano. Just go over to derpibooru and put "artist:suirano, rainbow dash" in the search bar and make sure your filter is set to everything.

The end made me happy. Hoping she gets to stay this way, but the amulet gets destroyed or something.

She was wearing some sort of ancient robes,designed to show off the female form as much as possible.

Wait... where's is rainbow dash crown... her new succubus crown?!?

Oh now that's just cruel, ending the story like that with Daring about to tell Rainbow a story of what she did once on an Adventure, does that mean you will be making a sequel to this story then?

I knew by the end of the fic that Rainbow Dash would end up getting pregnant.

I'm curious as to what those projects are.
I have a feeling, but I don't want to presume anything.

Rainbow still has massive tits...well done.
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I wonder since RD pregnant, who is the father of her baby, Thunderlane or Soarin? It didn't say in the fic.

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Could be done as bonus chapters, if the author was interested enough.

PLEASE DO THE A DARK ALTERNATE ENDING!!!!:twilightoops::raritydespair::raritycry::pinkiegasp::fluttershysad::applecry::unsuresweetie: PLEASE!!!!:pinkiehappy:

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