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Michael Hudson


Original Works. It was a good run.

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Slow burn? What's that?

7530387 My first reaction was to look for what you had meant by that, as I had not included saying that this was a slow burn story in this version. However, nonetheless, slow burn pretty much just means that while you know the end result, the trip to get to that point in the corruption and such is, well, slow, They have five different days to go through as the candies do their jobs. Which yes, means I have a LOT of chapters to do for this.

Hmm...maybe just stick with one cover art, composited from the entire image series? Maybe featuring the 60% bimbofied version (semi-safe) of each girl? Just a suggestion.

7530399 Ah, like that...

Also, literally the first words in the description are "A slow burn ... story", so I'm not sure what you meant by "as I had not included saying that this was a slow burn story in this version.". :applejackunsure:

7530411 Whoops! I made the description a long while ago, so that is my mistake for forgetting that that was in there.

Today has been a weird day for me.

Wait...so the magic effects her clothes first? So she doesn't notice her bigger bust right away because her clothes already fit it?

Hmm...while a good way to keep her from noticing right away, I can't help but feel slightly disappointed. One of my favorite aspects of expansion related transformation is when the girl's clothes strain to contain the expansion...especially if this eventually leads to them bursting open.

7530576 Part of the issue there is that the change is so gradual, so even if it didn't grow her clothes, she would probably notice them being tight first. On the other hand, this is the small upgrade stage. We'll see how well the clothes keep up with the rest. :pinkiehappy: I do need to fill 6 chapter events for each character afterall.

7530593
Hmm...
If you haven't planned it out yet, I just had an idea for what could be left in Pinkie's note.

Miss Pie,
You are always such an energetic and bouncy party girl, it's amazing you never collapse in exhaustion. Always wanting others to smile. As a bit of a thank you, I've left you these, which will surely give you a smile. Have one a day for five days, and I guarantee it will add an extra bounce to your step, and open your mind to all new party ideas that your friends are sure to love.

How's that?

7530621 It's not bad, but each girl, to varying levels of solidity (such as Sunset is low, while Rarity is higher), have a set story arc in my mind, and, surprisingly enough, Pinkie is one of the MOST solid, and something as vague as that I don't think would work. Sorry!

7530633
It's alright. Just glad you liked it.

“At the very least, I’m putting you in just so I feel better.”

That's what she said!

What is sluttification?

7530797 A simple way to put it is that it's a less extreme version of bimbofication. While the girls may become inclined more and more to sex, they'll never become the dim wit, cock hungry, cookie cutter objects that bimbos normally are. They're allowed to keep what makes them them.

The whole thing is just ruined by Sunset in my opinion.

Upvoted for slow burn, Tracked for caution. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it.

Wonder what Discord's up to in general here (you can't tell me it's not him) and... this is post RR, pre FG, right? So no Sci-Twi? If either version of Purple Smart is showing up, you should probably update your description to seven girls instead of six.

Also: I'd be amused if the other side of the mirror was way more relaxed about sex and Sunset's just formed bad habits to the contrary, so the candy's not so much relaxing her inhibitions as it is reminding her of how she was back home. And Principal Celestia brings it up to Princess Twilight when she shows, and Twilight just can't understand what the problem is.

So I'm calling it now that it's Discord doing this. Cros+Did=Discord.

Wow...talk about deep emotional issues for Pinkie...

7532302 I also noticed. But! Pony-world Discord or Human-world Discord??

7535230 I'm gonna say pony world. I've alwys seen EQ Discord as a nutty professor whom just seems to be everywhere.

So Discord is behind this....

Can't say I didn't see this coming.

Wow.
Really emotionally heavy chapter, and I certainly didn't expect "Mr. Did" to step in personally.
...although right now I'd really like to rewire Soarin's intestinal tract.

Applejack liking pears?

Heresy.

7551575 Now if that there ain't a red flag about how those candies mess with ya.

Whelp, we have a boy to hunt down. Hey, who wants to help me hunt down Soarin? You have to at least want tear off his Pinkie finger.

Love all the Soarin haters right now. Y'all are funny people. Though granted, I'm right on board with all of you.

So. Mr. Did, Discord, has been revealed. I wonder if he is doing this just for the love of chaos (because why not?) or if he has a more personal goal aside from his usual love of chaos. Is there something unique in the candies that not only provides the reactions promised but also will slightly hypnotize the girls. Considering the work this artist has done, I would not be surprised if that was the outcome.

As far as AJ liking pears. Maybe this EG version of her is slightly different from her Equestria version. Maybe she doesn't hate pears. Or she is being sarcastic.

Looking forward to more.

I do hope that the previous comments by the author are true, and that sexy doesn't have to mean brain dead. Losing the essential elements of these characters for a cheap thrill isn't worth it in my opinion.

7556104 That's a large part of why, despite the name, this is sluttification, rather than bimbofication. There is only one sort of bimbo. There are plenty of types of sluts.

Very nice. I like this approach with Fluttershy...especially the bit about the sluttier behavior not actually influencing her shyness.

Discord, you are so right about the shy thing.

please could you pm me the links to the pics, I missed the first few. thank you.

Hello fellow Brony, I like your works and downloaded most of all the completed, Cancelled and on-hiatus stories so far. Waiting until you have completed the "Incomplete" stories. Hope you are doing well...

Flamin'Kisses:twilightsmile:

Did... Cros... It's an anagram ain't it? He is Discord. Clever. More clever the splitting the name in half without some changes, like I've seen a lot of people do. Mr.Cord or Dis sounds stupid sometimes

7720648 actually it is for some one who wants their identity a secret really remeber some mob bosses have names like that ( also you can think of it as 'i just 'did' you')

When I saw the canceled tag, I almost screamed.

A shame this is cancelled. Bimbofication fics where the characters don't lose what makes them, them are so rare.

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