After the disappearance of Blitz Surge, Burst and the gang get some much needed rest during spring break. Plenty of time to rest up, and for the girls to have some quality time with their boyfriends.
NOTE: The sex tag is for situations, and descriptions of the girls in the beach chapter.
Burst Stream, Inferno Flare, Steel Edge, Akage Strider, and Tyrannus Thunder are owned by me
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Chapters (18)
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Kill me8055873
Soooooo, did you like the chapter?
8055888
Yee, I can tell you liked the movie.
8055888 I am loving this so far! A perfect story to do with spring break around the corner I'm looking forward to seeing what they will be doing for there spring break
curious question: are we going to be seeing Pinkie and/or Akage duel this story?
8055888 so did the movie have the theme?
8056510
Yes. But I won't spoil WHEN they use the theme.
8056176
Next chapter's up!
8056262
Hi sir, you called?
8058186
so how do you like the story?
8058213
In all seriousness, I get the feeling this is a sort of "calm before the storm" to show the characters interacting and having fun before Blitz returns/you kick off that numbers themed story (whichever you were planning first), and in the narrative as a whole this is a nice bit of relief, though on its own I can't find myself forming much of an opinion yet.
8058170 awwww~ such a loving and Sweet chapter evolving a relationship
looking forward to seeing what will happen next
8058468
Next chapter's up.
8061924 well 1 I love this chapter
it is was so good and amazing, both Indigo friends growing to her quickly and how Midnight is close to Ice because of there past and what they learned from it I'm looking forward to seeing the next one and 2. Ice needs to now has a new mistake to deal with and that is making sure not to be singing so loud and to do a better job on keeping the door shut
8061944
Next chapter's up!
8062338
t-this chapter was so beautiful! The talk with Celestia and Moon and the talk with moon and Burst about if he regrets his decision on his choice he made this chapter was heartwarming and almost got me into tears
Walked in expecting to autistically screech.
Walked out happy that I'll be the only one not doing that.
I applaud you sir.
8062357
Sooo, good chapter?
8062338
Does Celestia need a partner?
8062425
Well, I had two choices. rule 63 Nightmare, or Mirror Sombra. What was your idea?
8062432
How about future Burst, unless that would be a bit weird?
8062438
Uhhhh...yeah. It's kinda weird. But please PM me the idea! Also, which of the two current choices do you like more?
8062441
I liked the chapter, the emotional rollercoaster of almost having me groaning felt like a good early-April fools joke (though at the same time more nonsense on the actual first has all my approval)
But on to the real point of this post: Why does everyone need a partner? You have a lot of characters already so I think you should focus on keeping who you have fleshed out first. Burst's arc with Celestia made for a good tale of how a fine relationship sometimes just can't last and Celestia's role after as "the one Burst had to let go of" served for a good look into letting Burst grow, something very few of the characters do. I find Mr. Gold to be one of the less-cringy people I interact with on this site, but he also has a problem of too-many characters going on with him so taking his advice of adding new characters without having any overall meaning to the story after a little while would not do you any favors
This is why my one OC is a villain, that way he plays a role in causing chaos among the several good guys you already have, serving as a potential tool to develop a character he conflicts with. If you really insist on getting Celestia a guy then I think your two suggestions would serve a better purpose than a future Burst, It either introduces an older clone of the main guy who falls into the "guy who is only there to date a pony" category I'm starting to dislike, or harms Burst's character by implying that at some point in the future, Burst will REGRESS as a character (unless our Burst learns to develop more as a character by trying NOT to become future Burst, which traps alt!Burst again in this category and now I'm just rambling)8062338 dang, when you put the feels in, YOU MAKE US CRY!
8062482
To answer why everyone needs a partner, it's because of one of Burst's beliefs. that no one should be alone.
8062579
Whelp
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Duty calls
8062660
That image reminds me...JACK IS BACK BABY! YEAH!
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The new season is just so happy
8062356
Next chapter's up!
8062529
Good crying, or bad crying?
Glad I could finally tell someone about my past.
8062938 This was a sweet chapter like how north told his past and I'm looking forward to seeing how the rest of the couples are doing before they go to the beach
8063160
Sooo, did you already develop a past for North?
8064165
Yeah, I'll PM it to you.
Everyone likes tech puns.
That's only when they get it lad.
Don't be such a download North.
8064377
So what do you think of my version of North's past?
8064416
It was good, but North has a more hidden past. He isn't everything that he seems.
8064421
So can I expect that PM soon?
8064423
Yeah.
8064416 another amazing chapter between Nightfall and twilight with some nice puns Aswell
Now we just have few remaining moments with the couples
The dazzlings and there boyfriends
Shadow and Starlight
Golden and sunset
RD and Steel
And Inferno and rarity
Then we get to the nice beach time chapters of the story
8064429
Next chapter's up.
8064421
A character with depth. Expectations are now up.
8064480
So how do you like the characters so far?
8064512 consider my PM to you about Akage.
8064543
Well, the new OCs will get more development in my final installment. Also, I thought you'd like to know about a new series I have planned. Wanna hear about it in a PM?
8064553
Sure
8064585
Also, I made villains tailored to the OCs for the final installment.
8064455
Next chapter's up!
This is the best chapter of this story. It served as a great epilogue to Shadow's arc. Shadow is probably the second most developed character after Burst because he got a complete arc and this look into him and Starlight after the end did a good job concluding his tale.
Still think him being desperate to get a girlfriend but ending up forever alone was what should've been done.
Hey mlpfan, come at me bro!