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Bahamut0


I'm a fan of Yu-Gi-Oh!, a few other anime, and videogames. That being said, hope you enjoy my stories!

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Abyss now has a second chance, and she's met a boy, Narico, who's caught her interest. How every, the God Cards gave her new life a price. She must find a person who can love her despite the mistakes she's made. Little does she know, Narico has his secrets too.

Abyss is owned by me.
Narico is owned by MLPFan1

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 19 )

There is no possible way this can go wrong.

Awwwww :heart: these first 2 chapters were so amazing! Both thinking about each other wondering if they will like them despite there past mistakes and now I'm looking forward to seeing how there date will turn out to be.. i mean nothing possible can go wrong

OH WAIT!., I just realized that if everything goes well and WHEN they find out there secrets about each other... they might have some fun messing with the others with Narico abilities.. because looks like fang is the only one and probably might get a mouth full on why he didn't tell the others narico was a changelling

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It took a while, but the next chapter's up!

8046240 This was soooooo amazing and good and was sweet with some cute moments Aswell :heart: looking forward to seeing what will happen next

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Next chapter's up!

8046463 :fluttercry::raritycry: s-so beautiful!... This was a good loving chapter between them now that they told each other there secrets they both still care and love each other all the same and more! Now with them showing there love for each other and show that they will never be alone again.. they can now show the others there love .. of course after having some fun with them that is .. I mean she is Now dating a changelling and of course that comes with its perks to have fun... butttt there I'd also the fact of sunset golden and Moon I mean 1.they came from Equestria so they know about the changellings and 2. There reaction to it

YES EXPLANATION FOR HOW SHE GOT A HOLD OF EVERYTHING TO SET THE PLOT- *clears throat*
I enjoyed this chapter, two characters opening up for the sake of bonding. This story itself is a neat break from the action to focus on two "new" characters and their backstories/feelings. I know the two are bonding for shipping's sake so this hope is invalid but if these two had stayed friends for a while before taking that step and becoming a couple I'd have been totally okay with that. I am curious to see if Abyss still has her powers, if she doesn't that can easily be explained with a simple "The god cards took them away from me" but I'd love to think that they come from dark ambitions, which is why Blitz was able to pick them up so easily as well. Perhaps love, or just the happiness of a bond with someone, would awaken a more pure form to them as well... but this is all too much headcanon and not enough review.

>Not official
>Openly kissed
>rip Ren

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It was just a forehead kiss. Not a lip-lock. things are official when there's a lip lock.

8047209 :heart::pinkiesmile: another good happy ending to another great story and now with them being a growing soon to be official couple this was a good Epilogue and looking forward to seeing the next story

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Hmm. Considering the Power Rangers movie is out now, I think I'll do a story of Burst and Moon watching Power Rangers to celebrate.

8048045 Cool! That sounds like a good idea I'm looking forward to it

8048045 but I must warn you... WATCH OUT FOR SPOILERS! Some people I follow already made a blog review about the movie! SO WATCH OUT! FOR THOSE SPOILERS!

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Don't worry. I put a No Spoliers warning in the story info. Also, it should post soon.

8048192 yay! Can't wait to see it!

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