It's been a thousand years since the Elements of Harmony were last active. In that time, peace has reigned throughout the land of Unity. But all good things must come to an end. Evil forces have begun to stir. Ones that harmony alone won't be enough to defeat. Unity needs protectors to rise. It needs heroes. And it will get them. This is their story. And it all begins with a single promise.
Note: This story is a reboot of my old series called Elements of Heroism. Reading it is not required in order to understand what's going on, but doing so is appreciated. Thank you. And I hope you enjoy this new beginning.
Chapters (32)
Moves much too fast for my liking, but otherwise nicely thought out.
Would recommend writing more in between the time skips, and put more emotion into the characters.
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Thank you for the suggestions. But which characters needed more emotion? Feel free to PM me.
So far so good.
BTW the DBZ at the end...Although the Funimation dub is universal...The Oceans dub gave us this iteration of THE line:
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Anything in particular you liked about the chapter?
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Yes, the dialogue between Celestia and Twilight showed Twilight that Celestia isn't perfect and even she a princess...can tell a lie...even for a good reason.
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Glad you enjoyed it. See, the seasons might be a bit longer this time around. I've decided to change up the formula and throw in some moments/chapters dedicated solely on interaction between the cast.
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Hey I’m SO SORRY I didn’t get to this sooner I didn’t know that this was out yet BUT I finished and got all caught on AND I’m really REALLY enjoying the Reboot so far and I’m looking forward to seeing more
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glad you like it! because the next chapter is up!
nice!
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Awesome character! Great to see Inferno make his appearance! and now we have 2! of the elements of Heroism that has appeared
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Next chapter's up!
I really like both of the new chapters both when my first OC made his appearance AND really like the downtime chapter Aswell and how ace explain his necklace to Burst and Inferno
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Glad you enjoy it. Btw, could you PM me some info you had for Ace's grandpa? I was hoping to include him in a future season.
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Sure BUT might have to send you it tomorrow it’s midnight where I’m at and about to go to bed
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'Kay. G'night!
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Next chapter's up!
8636272 great chapter! Nice to see Steel making his appearance and looks forward to seeing the rest of the EoH to make there appearances
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Next chapter's up!
The true lesson...if you boast about something...back it up with proof or with your ability.
did ace just break the fourth wall?
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Great chapter REALLY like when Ace broke the fourth wall
Doing some research on magical objects would also be helpful.
Great chapter.
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Next chapter's up.
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Great chapter! We gotten to hear Ace backstory with his brother Dark Ice And now we gotten to where ice was trick in joining the nightmare forces to gain false courage
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Next chapter's up. Have fun!
meta kinght is NOT the most broken in the game
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Next chapter's up!
nice job!!!!!
AWWWWW
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Awwwww~ so a sweet and cute chapter
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Next chapter's up!
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Great chapter! Now with A nightmare warrior destroyed and Ace finding out the truth about what happened to his older brother so hopefully he will save him to show him true courage
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Another chapter's out!
Great chapters! 1 with Burst and Celestia which was nice AND Ace And Ice Fighting with Ace finally getting his Duelist arms
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Next chapter's up.
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Great chapter! 😊 so happy to see a new one like how Steel kisses Rainbow at the end making her blush dark looks forward to seeing the next one
nice
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Got another one for you. Enjoy!
I love BOTH of the new chapters so much 😊 with only 9 more chapters to go witch to deafeating the other nightmare forces and night terror ASWELL as ice showing his true courage before coming to the season 1 final
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Oh there'll be more than 9. Remember. I have more villains from the Nightmare Forces. Granted not all of them will be used, but expect a slightly longer episode count for the season.
Nightmare Rarity?
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Oh yes my friend. I will be introducing her VERY soon.
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Alright then sounds good to know
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Cool. Btw, I posted the latest chapter.
Good chapter.
The interactions between Ice and Ace seems to have improved from the original...I like it.
BTW GO TO TWITCH (Gamesdonequick) NOW!!! FINAL RUN!!! 2 MIL HYPE!!!
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Glad you like it. Any favorite moments from some of the other latest chapters?
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The dialogue has improved, that's what I've noticed, you've seen what you can improve on and doing so.
You have improved with the action scenes as well...I gotta give you props, going back and improving a series of stories like this...you are doing very well.
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Thanks man. This new work is the evolution of the old series. Hence the title I gave it.
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I know, and you're doing great and revamping this.
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Thanks. Btw, any favorite moments so far?