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An Ophidian Encounter

A lost explorer stumbles upon a mythological creature, one thought to only exist in history books, and tries to survive the encounter.

Written in 1st Person POV

For The Gorgony Group

Chapters (1)

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DeshLune

DeshLune #1 · Mar 27th, 2017 · · ·

Nicely done. I loved the character, and while I have no idea who it is. I can respect a fun little tale. I found several small mistakes scattered throughout, a few of them being you added a letter in the wrong place, or it just wasn't needed at all. In other places you mixed letters. But anyway I loved the references, and my headcanon for those two has moved to a ship. ^^

Bladewolf

Bladewolf #2 · Mar 27th, 2017 · 1 · ·

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It was written to be vaguely immersive, but all in all as an exercise. Glad you enjoyed it at least, and lack of an editor (editing yourself just isn't the same) can cause word problems.

DeshLune