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Who better to understand the wicked wiles of the heart than the Princess of Love herself, Cadance?
But when Shining Armour returns home to find Cadance all painted up like Twilight, and trying her hardest to seduce him, he can't help but feel that his wife has gone off the deep end.
Maybe she understands the wicked heart of stallions better than anyone?
But what will happen when Twilight discovers her brother's dirty little secret?
I can't properly articulate how hot this is, so I'll just post this gif.
Well, this was very entertaining. I support the idea of another chapter, possibly when he meets up with his sister afterwards. Then the images can't get out of his head, and the whole situation turns into him feeling hilariously awkward, and Twilight absolutely clueless. Just for shits and giggles.
MOAR
I must see how deep the rabbit hole of depravity goes, will Cadance push Shining Armor and Twilight together for real? Is her next target of seduction going to be Celestia-as-'Luna'? Kinky Changeling roleplay? Kinky Changling 'roleplay'...involving actual changlings?
“But Twilight is my sister!” Shining Armor hissed in response, staring down at his painted wife.
“And I’m not...” Cadance said in a decidedly seductive tone. “You can live out your desired on me without any actual depravity having taken place...”
Hits a little close to home...
“Honestly Twilight,” Shining said, “I could never be with you. We're brother and sister. I love you as a sister, and I will admit that I am sexually attracted to you, but we're related. It just wouldn't be right.”
...“I found a creative outlet for my incestuous desires, without giving in to them,” Shining Armor said, matter-of-factly, “You should do the same.” -Adventures of a Teenage Foalsitter; Chapter 17
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/33213/17/Adventures-of-a-Teenage-Foalsitter/Mutual-Attraction
You took your story in a much different direction though. Good job!
Also...
“You think pills are hard to swallow?” Cadance rebuked suggestively, raising a brow at him.
LOL 
Can we get a single Cadance and Shinning fic without the layers of retardation?
Like this?
Okay, Pinkie's face is killing me with adorableness.
As strange as this is, it is written well.....and it is with that of which I must say....
SA folded way too quickly which made this a tad ridonks.
Cadance could do with some role playing lessons. Her Twilight is far off enough that he's attracted to an entirely different pony that's a horny seductress, not his sister.
The "all guys want their sister" message wasn't well received. Probably because I'm not the result of inbreeding and incest isn't my fetish. I would change that buttttt its probably necessary to make bringing Twilight into the mix less forced/stupid.
>>926713 Wait'll you read my Cading Armors >:3.
Well, that was certainly... something 
.
This is rather far from my cup of tea, perhaps another beverage entirely, but regardless I think I can pick out a few things that I liked.
There were a few grammatical errors and you relied pretty heavily on the word "rebuked" earlier on, but as a whole I found the story to be well-written and of a higher quality than most. Additionally, I liked the chemistry between Cadance and Shining Armor; they snarked back and forth quite well.
I enjoyed this a lot! I can't wait till the sequel man!
>>926632 I agree somewhat. Yes, I want to see the changeling thing (I think Chrysalis is kinda cute.. don't judge me), and Shining X Twi can be boring sometimes, more or less with Twilight wanting to rut Shining since that has been done to death, but this one was at least creative to an extant,
Weird thing is? I'm jaded now. Really really jaded. I hate incest fics, I hate pedo fics, and this is no exception. But I can live with, more so I'm bored with these types of fics. Hell, Shining Armor is probably getting sick of it.
Twilight: What do you say Big Brother? Wanna try this action?
Cadence: You can't hide your desires Shining.
Shining: Let me explain why I'm disgusted with this. As we develop as beings, certain things pop into our heads that are unacceptable. For this, it's Incest. The reason why we find it unacceptable is not because of morals. It's because our brains work in such a way that things that hamper our progress as a species doesn't work for us. If we all started fucking our siblings, we'd just stop.
Twilight: That was a long explanation.
Shining: But more importantly, I'm bored by this. I only get shipped with Cadence or Twilight and hardly Chrysalis. Hell, I gotta get with the rest of the Mane 6 still. You two bore me. Good bye.
Cadence: Did we just get ditched?
Twilight: We got ditched and dissed.
I am not a big fan of clop fics or any thing with direct and described sexual action in it. In fact I read about half of this and then quit because this was just...wrong..and I was straight up weirded out...then I was back a few minutes later... 
it just drew me back in. as weird as it was, it was strangely arousing. 
>>928770 You failed then, but you have moxie for trying.
Fun fact: Cadance could've killed herself by painting herself up as Twilight. Think golden women.
>>929248 Cading Armor is canon though + Shining Armor has never met any of the Mane 6 before the wedding. I'm interested in the concept of shipping him with one of the Mane 6 but it seems pretty cracky.
I have to admit, Cadence's conclusion is almost exactly the same as my own regarding Twi and Shining. 
Also, I have to admit that I enjoyed this. I won't try to bluff my way around it. This was well written, thought provoking, and yes, even arousing. 
All in all, a good read! 
>>932192 Fun fact. That's pretty much BS.
http://www.snopes.com/movies/films/goldfinger.asp
She painted her fur, not her naked flesh. She's an alicorn, Not a human.
Normal body paints used today would rarely cause you to become sick, ill, or otherwise impaired. Old paints, with multiple layers, over your entire body, would begin causing problems after a few hours. It would take about 14 hours with full paint on for you to get overheated enough to die. And that's for humans. I'm willing to bed that ponies are different.
Ostensibly, fur can`t be painted, it would have to be dyed. But then again, I`m pretty sure alicorn of all creatures would have enough of magical potency to actually amend the coat color for a while.
That being said, it was amusing, but makes ponies wonder, what other fetishes Shining Armor hides behind his wholesome exterior? And how much of it is Cadence willing to draw out for amusement and pleasure?
don't know if anyone else caught on to this (i got bored with reading ALL the comments...) or if it's a by-product of me being distracted by steam sales (those damn steam-sales; they're evil i tell you! EVIL!) in the middle of reading:
“Why? Because you have sexual urges for your sister that both of you are far too shy to get out in the open,” Cadance said with a calm wave of a hoof.
both, as in twilight herself either feeling the same way or knows about his urges? if that's the case, then shining didn't seem to pick up on it...this is never gonna leave my mind, so please tell me if i got it wrong
anyways: awesome story!
finally got around to reading it.
*goes and reads*
edit: I....ah......mm............
>>935484 I've always looked at Cading as a boring, vanilla sex relationship, though I'm probably personally biased towards what I like. Changing your coat's colors to be some other pony is a bit of a hassle. In an idea for a fic that won't ever be written, much less see the light of day, I have Celestia use transformation magic to accomplish the same goal, being someone other than herself.
>>933405 :3 Not entirely as you said. I think i'm done adding comments here unless you didn't get my pm, AP.
As opposed to actually using dye or paint, magic seems like an enticing choice.
Also, why vanilla!? An alicorn who`s sphere is love is likely to be...abundantly versed in all ways of expressing such love, including physical ones. The only way to justify vanilla in this is making Shining Armor... less then adventurous in bed. But I doubt that assertion. By the rule of thumb, sexual deviancy is more common among persons of high intellect, and Shining Armor is shown as being capable of keeping up with Twilight, not to mention being a captain of royal guard - meaning he`s bloody well likely to be sharper then a tack.
That is pretty much the same as saying "yeah i could have killed that 220 pound navy seal using only my eyelashes", when in realty you just made him blink by throwing a random punch at him when he was trying to shake your hand.
That being said: It was a well written fic. i even found it a bit arousing until shinning actually belied he was doing his sister.
" “If you can look me in the eyes and say that there’s no sexual tension between you two, then I’ll get myself washed up and grant that changeling fantasy you’ve been trying to hide from me,” Cadance responded with a sly grin. "
... Noooooo why didn't he lie! D: ~ Now I'll forever be saddened that there'll never be a scandalous fic involving Shining and -
*sees 'incomplete' tag*
And now I've favorited two of your stories and am watching you :|
I never thought I would put this up, but.......
Now Jayne Cobb and I have to patiently wait for you to write Chapter 2.
Its your move now.
Hoo, boy! Finally got around to reading this one, as I'm a BIG Shining/Twilight fan, ever since saw the finale, even if it doesn't feature that... as of yet.
Something I feel should point out: don't their eyes differ slightly as well? 
Know they're pretty similar, but according to like this site: http://mlp.wikia.com/wiki/Characters and their respective pages, Cadance/Cadence and Twilight have purple eyes, but different shades of them. But hey, if you want to keep it to wings being only giveaway, it's cool! Just thought I'd say. 
So, Cadance/Cadence was fun to read, in your version of how you portrayed her. Even though you'd think she wouldn't allow him to be with anyone else, since they're married and all, even if she knows of his 'desire' to be with his little sis. If encouraging him to do that, even though I know as of yet, that's not what was being shown. Can only imagine their surprise and reactions, when it DOES happen! And Shining Armor's reactions and ultimate giveup, even if was a bit fast (but hey, it's porn), were interesting to read! And the scene was pretty hot as well, all the buildup and stuff, until the finish!
Well, I look forward to the next chapter of this, as well as possible more! If keep it going for a bit, but if not, will continue to read some of your other works!
She read a book about it.
or maybe just teleportation
“You can live out your desired on me without any actual depravity having taken place...”
“You can live out your desire on me without any actual depravity having taken place...”
“I’d lie to get kinky changeling roleplaying...
“I’d like to get kinky changeling roleplaying...
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