MOAR!

Ok yes I saw some grammer errors but other than that GOOD JOB BRO!

>>867141867141 are you serious?

I think you could make a good story with this. Like, maybe a revolt in pony kind or something? You could really mold this into anything. Maybe you could make a story of a human on hiding, trying his best not to be converted. I like where this could go. Good work!

>>867462867462

Dead serious.

This is the main reason why I hate TCB, the genocide inflictiong ponies. But good job, this is the best work I've seem thus far that really flies in the face of TCB.

Ok so Im actually interested to see where I can take this story so I think Ill continue this but with REALLY short chapters. They'll pobably be only like 1000 words long, but ill update it frequently.  

oh, ho ho ho, it's like a zombie Apocalypse scenario, only they are smart

meh, I'd still be safe from it, based on contingency plans, strategy, and back ups of back ups

although, I'd most likely be one of the first to go through with it

it all begins with location, and boy do I have that down already, Lol, LET THEM COME

my sanity is back, nothing to see here, move along...

Not bad.

A lot of grammatical errors and a bit rushed you you did  pretty good job with the setting.

Let's hope the remnants of Humanity really make the ponies pay.

From what I've seen, your grammar in the story is mostly fine but the notes about it are horribly written.

I like this whole concept of a universe you've created. First of it's kind from what I've seen. Can't wait for the rest, although you need to go back and fix some errors that you made, but it was still clearly visible as to what you meant to say. Good work!

what's hilarious is that in normal emergencies the library is the best place to seek refuge simply because no one neither goes there or thinks anyone else would

why, even during Hurricane Katrina, almost every building was broken into or looted, either broken into for a shelter or for the items in it

the only buildings spared were libraries, they were not damaged one bit, save for water damage

indeed even in other survival stories, rarely is the library used as it seems 'useless'

in any case, the further from 'settled' area you are, the better off you'd be

I only brought this up because I'm sure in this universe you created, Twilight would almost certainly visit as many 'old' libraries as she probably could to read the books there, thus making the plan useless

oh yeah, keep working on that grammar, other than that keep up this interesting story

Anybody know someone who could make me a picture for this story?

>>875003875003 what type of pic are you looking for?

The same one I have but with the title in the top left corner where the clouds are.

i would fire the moar cannon, but it's in for repairs. great idea, great story!

uh thanks

Heh... Twilight as a prison guard, Rainbow Dash chasing down fighter jets and Applejack (?) giving orders? I wonder what the others are up to?

Imposibru! Australia wouldn't fall that early on, we have our boarders protected by Great White Sharks and Crocodiles. But a good chapter never the less.

>>896374896374

that won't work because they got 'HER'

I love how he has a thing to his bombing

Keep up the good work

>>896504896504 Fine I'll sit on the cape with a Minimire and an OZSTYER and take them out... oh and Ill bring my cousins around in the Holden Ute. Equestria isnt prepared for the sawage sizzle that will go down.

Nice story so far.  Although I think humanities DOOMED!.  I don't see how ever going to get out of this.

Take an M-82, and put charges in the room your'e shooting from. Shoot a couple of pegasi from a window. Run the fuck out of there. When they get in the room. KABOOM!!! Tiny little pony parts for everybody.

I am really enjoying the story, keep it up, keep, it, up.

This is good. Keep it up. Idea, make him spray a little gasoline over few buildings around the bomb and make him spray the grass too. Makes a good fire, and scares even more than a random bomb.

Fun.

Well even if Europe and the north America fall we still have two groups of humans left. The ones at the center of the earth and the ones on the moon though the drawbacks are that both groups are remenants of the third reich. See what movies I'm referring to

>>896374896374 dont forget your kangaroos!!!! they would desimate the ponies.

>>899090899090 Not really.

I hope Twilight realizes they're the evil ones here. But nevertheless, keep going!

Like you wrote in the first chapter, on how they cut off the internet. Thats pretty hard to do man. There has to be a couple groups of humans sustaining the deepnet, along with cell towers, especially now that cell phone companies can fit a cell tower into a 60x60mm box. The internet is forever man.

so hes a panic inducing money bomber, wonder what his cutie mark will be?  

Hmmm, I wonder what date could be so special, lol it sounds like an execution

This was short, but what was said was powerful

I really want to hear how he finally got caught! OH well, I can wait...

I like how you make ponification process seem like deaths row.

Thats gotta be the worst guilt trip ever .

probably Independence day, hope he gives a kick ass speech

like the Gettysburg Address or something    

>>919229919229 That's kind of what it is.

>>919229919229 That's kind of what it is. In my opinion, at least.

Anyway, good job! And I hope he does make an awesome speech.

Boom, headshot.

Btw nice last of us cover art. (ignores the fact that no credit is given to the game for art.)

MOAR!

>>961678961678 oops, I didn't even know.

Im sorry but why doesn't humanity unleash an nano-virus , or because its not technical man made a biological  (biololjcal)  into the barrier.  

lets commit a roflacaust  

Oh, yes, Celestia.  "Perfectly" reasonable.  A Bureau gets attacked, so you decide to confirm the reasons why they attacked.  Dumb move.  Very dumb move.  For once, I would like to see a fic in which it isn't kill or be killed, convert or die.  I mean, Twilight likes reading, right?  Have her read history one WWII and notice the similarities between events, or something!  Wake up, you self-righteous chunks of glue and stop being self-righteous "my race is superior" chunks of glue!

Sorry, it's not you, Sherlock.  It's just that I've been trying to find a story in which neither side is made of hypocrites and bigots, and so far have been unsuccessful.

That was badass

Now THAT was an ending that was both surprising and incredible, I'll be sure to read any other stories you write in the future,

the way this ended, it seems like more to this story could definitely be told