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LightWinzz


Christian, graduate, gamer, semi-artist, writer and Dungeon Master. Take your pic ladies and gents.

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When a new threat attacks the timeline of Sonic the Hedgehog, a new hero must be brought into the fold to correct the past and save time itself. With the aid of new friends, Rainbow Dash takes it upon herself to correct past events and save Sonic's future. The only problem being if they can bring themselves to work together. A new threat lurks in the shadows, and Rainbow must discover its true intentions before all of time is lost, for Sonic's world, and possibly even her own...

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When a new threat attacks the timeline of Sonic the Hedgehog, a new hero must must be brought into the fold to correct the past and save time itself.

You put "must" in twice.

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That's just how much they must do it! :moustache:

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Thanks for the heads up. I had to rush a couple things sadly when I uploaded it from Fanfiction to Fimfiction. It was about 3:00 in the morning and there were some things I needed to get done. Not that I'm making an excuse for sloppiness though. Plus, I don't really have a designated proof reader. If you see any grammar errors like this throughout the story it'd be more than helpful to give them a shout out so I can fix them. I hope it didn't put you off from the story, however.

oh this is such a good story :pinkiehappy:

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I'm glad you think so! I'm wanting to get the next chapter out before the end of the month.

8328844 looking forward to it im amazed that you got 10 chapters done during just one day 😲

Wait orbot and cubot!? Eggman didn't have them until colors!

"UNKNOWN," he responded. "FROM A LOGICAL STAND POINT, I CANNOT SEE WHAT THE DOCTOR SEES IN YOU. YOUR ABILITIES ARE ABOVE THE AVERAGE ORGANIC, BUT WHEN COMPARED TO ME YOU ARE LACKING. AS MUCH AS I LOATH TO SAY IT, EVEN MY ORGANIC COUNTERPART IS FAR BEYOND YOUR SKILLS."

Shots fired!

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No no no! I had these chapters done already. They are all on Fanfiction. I just moved them over here so I can have them on both. I am aiming to have at least one chapter out each month. It's possible for me to get more than one, but there will always be at least one.

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Meh. At some point I decided, "why not."

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oh ok my bad that makes more sense then what i said about the chapters being on here same day :twilightblush:. Also that's fine i'd rather not rush any writer it does'nt make someone look good if they rush someone.

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You're all good. I didn't feel like I was being rushed. If anything, if people want to see more chapters then I must be doing something right.

So far, this story is pretty good. Looking forward to the next chapter.:twilightsmile:

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Thanks! I always hope to impress. Of course if anyone can give any pointers on what writing could be done better then please tell. I'm always looking to better my writing skills.

He just pushes me back three twice as hard.'

It should be 'three times as hard'

The damsel in destress in a hopeless situation at the hands of an evil villain,

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Overall, a good chapter. Just keep a sharper eye out for any errors in the future.

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Thanks for the update. I'm usually up till 3:00 in the morning writing these, so I sometimes I don't catch errors that I should notice pretty easily. I hope it didn't put you off and I hope you enjoyed the chapter. Please, be sure to let me know of any you see and I'll be sure to fix them.

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Happy to help. Minor errors don't ruin the story for me, but I still feel the need to point them out.

Thank you for that ending with Eggman.:rainbowlaugh:

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I felt that it was appropriate lol.

Looking forward to the next arc.

Sounds like Twilight just couldnt handle the power of Total Chaos!

Comment posted by LightWinzz deleted Oct 26th, 2017

Chaos. IT.IS.CHAOS.
Twilight went back and faced chaos. Wait a sec... I don't know the exact number, but I'm pretty sure at that point, Sonic is around 14 or so. So....does that mean that Rainbow finally meets teen Sonic, not kid Sonic? Because I've been waiting for that since I first started reading this.:pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

One last thing. If I'm correct about Chaos being the villain, then that means Shadow is next in line. ......I hope I'm right.

From Sonic CD to Sonic Adventure. Hyped for the next chapter.

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Well, you're not wrong.

In all honesty, this is a great story. Can't understand all the thumbs down. Maybe all those sayings about the animosity between Sonic fans and bronies are still true after all. :rainbowhuh: I await your continuation with baited breath.

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The thumbs down don't bother me at all 😁. If they don't like it they just don't like it. I hope lots of others do though, and I hope you're enjoying it, too!

Oh Sonic, you dog. XD Hands off the rump kiddo. I love how much he can get under RD's skin. The accuracy is real.

i love this story so far keep up the good work lightwizz :rainbowdetermined2:

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Will do. New chapter may be up soon.

He flashed her smile and said, β€œHey there. I’m Sonic. Sonic the Hedgehog.”

LOL he either was hit in the head too hard, or he doesn't even remember Rainbow Dash.:rainbowlaugh:

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or doesnt know its her due to the fact she should be older in Sonic's eyes.

I REALLY want to say this mystery person is Infinite but there are things that say otherwise....

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Seeing how he said the events will go on until Sonic Generations, and how so far we saw a lot of bosses that are from Generations, it could be safe to assume Time Eater is somehow behind all of this.

YAY! New chapter! Haven't read it yet, I'll tell you what I think when I do.

See something you like now, Dashie? I for one certainly hope so. :raritywink:

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Unlikely. The story's basically playing out Sonic Generations done from a pony perspective. And with no Infinite, we have a mystery figure behind the scenes.

Yes, give in to the theories. The first ones are always the most delicious. Just to give little bit of context, this story is going up to Sonic Generations for Sonic's timeline, nothing after. However, while Time Eater is a very good guess, I can confirm personally that it is not the villain that this villain is related to. Also, sadly, no Infinite. Although I can see how some of you may think that. Sadly its just a case of me making a character, wanting to get it out, then Sega does it before I can. Not saying I made Infinite, but the way he may carry himself does have some resemblance. I will say though I've already drawn out this character on paper. If you want to see him, well, sorry. You'll have to wait.

Does Tempest Shadow appear in this story?

Why do authors like to leave chapters on cliffhangers!?!?

Ah! A new chapter, and new cover art to examine! :pinkiehappy:

...I'm pretty sure you're not going to kill any of the three off (Sonic,Rainbow, and Amy), at least not now. Hmmm... The way I see it, the 'warm liquid' could be one of three things. Blood, Oil, or something I haven't thought of. Huh. So, either Gamma is hurt or dying, one of them is wounded, or something else. I don't know what scenario I'm hoping for...

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Never watched the movie sadly. 😁

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I'll just let you all know now, I'm not above killing certain important characters at any time. Just for a warning.

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Because how else am I going to keep you coming back? πŸ˜‰

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...Still. I think it's unlikely you'll kill Rainbow, and if you kill Sonic, you'll bring him back. At least that's what I think. Once it get's farther along in the story, the chance you might kill one of them increases.
Amy...she's not really very important, is she? ....I think I'm more worried about her dying than anyone else.

at least two people have seen the official artwork for him now.

Yeah, again, thank you for that. :pinkiehappy:

Also. New Chapter. :yay::pinkiegasp: :yay:

I have to say so far i am loving this

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