Sonic and the rainbows of equestria

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Sonic the hedgehog world renown hero of the planet Mobius has had many battles in his life but what if there was just a battle that he can't win? join sonic and the mane 6 as they strive to save everyone from the greatest threat sonic has ever faced in his life but can even sonic's speed and twilight's magic save everyone ?

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Estee

Estee #1 · Feb 21st, 2019 · 10 · · Blue blur (edited) ·

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Hclegend

Hclegend #2 · Feb 21st, 2019 · 10 · · Blue blur (edited) ·

>violence
>death
>romance
>sci-fi
>motherfucking SANIC crossover

I don't need my sanity. Let's dig in a bit.

Sonic the hedgehog had had many adventures some of them were fun and some of them were deadly but in the end
Everything worked out for him.

So is the taste of copper normal when reading fanfiction, or? Oh god, I'm having a stroke.

yeah yeah I'll make sure to send you back to egg face gift wrapped who know he might finally realize your useless

your useless

your useless

I'm going to have severe brain damage by the end of this. and I already have severe brain damage from the stroke earlier. If I don't make it through, tell my wife that she's a money stealing slut.

-Sonic's POV-

Stop this. Get some help. Decide if it's going to be first or third person, don't switch it halfway through. Also if you have to change perspective due to ~~you being unable to write for shit or getting bored~~ it being 100% mandatory for the flow of your ~~dreck~~ story, then let your audience figure it out.

Speaking of, why the hell does only Eggman get a description out of the Sonic cast? Yes, you describing the ponies on a MLP fanfiction site is utterly asinine, but you're not even consistent about this. You either assume that your audience are a bunch of normal, well-adjusted people who haven't played a Sonic game or a bunch of degenerate trash that have. Don't go halfway on this you hack.

Also. Get an editor. Learn basic grammar. Do something. The only people who would read this after 20 words without having some form of aneurysm are fellow 12-year-olds who just want to see Sonic crossover with MLP, because that's a totally original concept!that is original and whatnot.

Now excuse me, I need to purge the last dredges of humanity from myself after reading this. Maybe I'll pull a Sayori after this for the fun of it too. I don't know.

The Blue EM2

The Blue EM2 #3 · Feb 21st, 2019 · 10 · · Blue blur (edited) ·

SCRIPT FORMAT!

Honestly, how did this pass moderation?

Apollyon

Apollyon #4 · Feb 21st, 2019 · 3 · · Blue blur (edited) ·

There are more grammatical errors in this story than there are oxygen molecules.

The Blue EM2

The Blue EM2 #5 · Feb 22nd, 2019 · · · Blue blur (edited) ·

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Really?

Apollyon

Apollyon #6 · Feb 22nd, 2019 · 1 · · Blue blur (edited) ·

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No. I'm just saying it for the fuck of it.

The Blue EM2

The Blue EM2 #7 · Feb 22nd, 2019 · · · Blue blur (edited) ·

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It's probably correct though.

Texus

Texus #8 · Feb 24th, 2019 · · · Blue blur (edited) ·

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I haven't read it yet and I want to give it a fair chance, but I hope you can tell me, that not the whole Sonic Cast is in Equestria again.
I feel like one of the biggest problems with those stories may be that the stories are to crowded.

cunning_linguist