S1 Descrpition:
When The Element of Loyalty sends Sonic & His Friends To Equestria, The Meet up with Rainbow Dash & The Mane 6 Who happens to have a Chaos Emerald in their world. Now When Enemies like Eggman try to take it for themselves, Only Sonic & Rainbow Dash must save Equestria as well as The Chaos Dimension Before Eggman takes them all & makes his New Eggmanland
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rest assured no
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noted But sometimes i like to play it safe
Are you serious? I'm pretty sure it says in the Fim Fiction rules you cant write in script format like this dude. Yup. Specificity says: Stories in chat or script format. This includes stories in which characters speaking is indicated similar to this: "TWILIGHT: I sure do love books!" In the DO NOT WRITE section.
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i know man
which is why i'm gonna be using a new format in the next chapter.
I'm writing a crossover romance fimfiction too! Its going to be called, Silvaze Adventures in Equestria! My user name explains a lot to it.
How did this get approved?
2822487 you tell me
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You aren't supposed to write scripts, yet you did.
Read the rules first.
I didn't realise you had this here too. (I'm CaptainAwsum on Fanfiction) I do like this story.
Dat was so...AWSOME In my opinion this story gonna be just perfecto
Amy broke up with sonic i think she is posesed by some thing but if thats true then i think it soon will be SonDash
Dosent this page must be before 10th page?
I spoted 1 mistake "aj and applejack" you gonna fix that RIGHT
???
There is no words to express my joy reading this story so when next page will come to life?
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Fix it, i might
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just released it my friend! :D
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and SonDash
Expect more after
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This story is AWSOME Im looking foward to reading your story and one more thing "shadiw"you made a mistake
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fix it, i will and thanks!
add more airwolf.. HAWK FTW!!!
Mr Boldy Mc nosehair gets it....sooooo gets it
Keep on awesome work
3545530 ikr? and I like your pic
wuuuuut not airwolf????? airwolf 2.0 was totally destroyed by airwolf 1.0 and were the hell is string, Dominique, and catie?
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Yeah, SonDash is awesome :D
Just so you could know, Sonic is faster than Dash but, by the power of writing stories, THEY CAN BE THE SAME SPEED! HAHA! THE FUN HAS BEEN DOUBLED!
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Wait... YOURE CAPTAINAWSUM?! omg... Ive seen your account on fanfiction.net
wow nice comment deleting casue your to much of a faggot to handle the gayness of this story
"" yelled Rainbow
I think you forgot something.
I am sorry, but this book just gave me a bad taste in my mouth.
Really good story line, but why are there unnecessary capital letters everywhere?
Way to go. This is what I call a strong chapter.
I can just imagine spike saying "DAMN".
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did u let this story die
Was cream with them cheering
You mean “pegasus”, right? “Pegasi” is the plural form.
Or “speedster”?
Or a “pegasus”