Page generated in 0.021 seconds
Total duration
936 users online
1,269,206 hits today, 1,892,089 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
More please?
I agree with the dragon, could we please have more?
9036714
But what happened with Chrysalis? Did she go to the ceremony? Cause it wasnt stated is she actually did go or not.
Also, will there be a sequel?
That . . was a bit too abrupt of an ending . .
There needs to be AT LEAST an Epilogue of sorts.
*You're
9083324
9083017
9082918
9082865
9082784
There'll be an epilogue, then. Maybe two.
9083324
Really? All these years I thought it was your. Huh. Thanks for pointing that out.
9083380
So this it for the series?
9083390
Yes. Did you like the chapter?
9083415
Yep sad know that we don't get much for like whatever happened when twilight was ascending and stuff but oh well
Good, great in fact, this story has long held a place on my über favorites list. That said, I see two mistakes in this chapter, or at least one omission and one apparent mistake. Going backwards...
Ummm, I'm going to assume over one eye, other wise how does he see?
Also, when did Celestia clean up after her battle? She went from handing off Chrysalis to getting dressed with no stops in between that I saw.
Still, beautiful, and I certainly hope this isn't the end of this universe, if for no other reason than Chrysalis.
9083475
I deleted your blank comment box. Also, thank you for commenting. I'll fix the aforementioned issues.
9083471
What do you mean by what happened when Twilight ascended?
9083483
Huh, wonder where the blank came from. OH well, could've been worse, a mistype meant for a whole different type of audience for example...
Smiles and nods, "I almost wish they used or at least tried to use the elements to heal Chrysalis. Still, I do want to see the future for her, and I'd love to see how this Equestria develops."
9083485
Its been a bit so I don't remember but that whole can see the metaverse or something you had at one point thats what i ment
9083530
This tale got away from me a bit. I could probably write multiple sequels.
9083542
Ok
Great story my friend. Cant wait for a sequel. Keep up the great work
Great chapter looking forward to more
Sorry it took me awhile to read this... Also I can't remember if I've commented on your story or not, sooo... Hi, I'm a reader who enjoys most everything having to do with Twi x Mare. And I decided to comment on a few things about this chapter. First, the part with Celestia not knowing how to promote Shining any further got me to laugh, quite the joke you crafted there. But, I've also decided to be nitpicky since the stuff you've written regarding Norse mythology is fairly accurate.
While this isn't technically inaccurate, they are gods ruling over Valhalla, I believe they generally prefer to be called Asgardians. You know, them not being Einhenjar and all... But as I said earlier, this would just be to get more accurate, ta-ta!
9100462
I know they're tagged I was just hoping you could label the specific chapters. I'm really reading this so I can expand upon my writing skills with storytelling and romance.
9100500
I'm flattered you'd read my story for writing advice. The chapter in question is not quite clop, though it is explicit. I'm trying to figure out how to label it. I see you reached the final chapter. May I ask what you thought?
9100531
I haven't read it yet your reply was for some reason on that chapter. As for how to label a chapter explicit I've seen some writers put in parentheses (Explicit) or (Clop) Next to the chapter title. Also if eternity is the last chapter then why is the story marked incomplete.
9100598
Heh. I meant latest chapter. D'oh.
9100602
Well, I'm about halfway through Summer-Afternoon, and so far I'm liking it. It's kind of strange because nonstraight ships were always something I avoided due to how I was raised, I'm not a homophobe I just tolerate it but don't endorse it in any manner. The real reason I'm reading this is, like I said, to improve my own writing. So far my favorite aspect is just seeing Twilight have her OP moments. I always enjoyed stories that do her power justice instead of underplaying her like the show does.
Well... this has been interesting. I'm assuming this isn't done yet. One thing I keep wondering is if Twilight and Celestia will somehow produce a "Magical Lesbian Spawn."
9102280
Glad you're enjoying it.
9082784
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/440421/mending-the-heart
Yup, there it is.
OH MY STARS ITS EXACTLY LIKE THE CANTERLOT WEDDING! Well almost, instead of Celestia it should have been Twilight and then Celestia should be the one being brainwashed while Luna is the one attempting to save the wedding, or maybe it should be Shining Armor?
Ya that's not Celestia. I think. Wait I'm confused.
Fuck. Ok I think there's 2 Celestia's, Chrysalis brainwashed Celestia to lie and give her the memories of the conversation Chrysalis had with Luna that way Luna wouldn't suspect much.
Now "Celestia" is going to transform as Twilight and it's going to be the Canterlot wedding all over again.
Twilight is fake, Celestia gets brainwashed, and Luna barges in and stops the wedding. Sounds familiar doesn't it?
Sister-In-law is fake, sibling is mine controlled, and other sibling barges in on the wedding.
Seriously? Did Chrysalis learn nothing? Do something original!
This is gonna end very badly, I can tell, I bet Celestia is gonna regret that later. (She kinda does but mostly doesn't)
Well, touch the sun and you get burned.
There litterly bugs, what do they hope to do with a being that can control the sun? Chrysalis is basically sacrificing every single one of her subjects.
YES!!!!