The battle of the Hoof ended 9 years ago. For some ponies, the scars are still fresh in the mind. As Threnody, a young heartmender working with the Followers of the Apocalypse will find, sometimes the hardest step is getting a Patient to speak.
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Just like always...Amazing Job Heartshine.....Can't wait for the next chapter whenever it's ready....Just one thing: How did Littlepip get so bad??
"On a wall appeared a unicorn with a crown"
Why "unicorn"?
"Tower Ninety Two"
"Ninety-Two"?
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1. Threnody only saw Celestia from chest up. Kinda hard to see wings if you have them folded at your side.
2. Ah! Good catch! I'm going to fix that. Thank you!
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Ah, and then by other characteristics recognized her as Celestia; thanks.
You're welcome. :)
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Um, I actually can explain that, somewhat. I might have to write up a blog post about it though. I hope you've been enjoying the story though! Regardless of the ooc-ness that you feel.
Fuckin' glorious man, nicely done! Lovin' how this is going, quite well done!
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Thank you! And it's um, miss, actually. I know, weird.
Yay another chapter and it has The great and colorful Pip! You wrote them all really well I gotta admit. Id have probably done the same as Blackjack. "Lets make sure everyone really is ok, by taking someone who will actually know." Makes sense to me.
Gahh now im hyper for the next parts :P. Good lucks!!
Awesome story can't wait to read more!!!!
8100597 BJ's not in a good way. She's surviving mostly out of guilt. She's got a world sized case of PTSD, and really, really wants to end her pain. However, she promised Glory she would live, and she promised Rampage she'd come back for her. At the same time she blames herself for Glory. For Rampage. For P-21. She's taken all that guilt upon herself. Also, she's positioning people who can help her feel better, putting them in places where she's not hurt contemplating the questions they ask. Also, she has a fundamental identity crisis: is she really Blackjack, or is she just a Blank clone that thinks she's Blackjack? The real BJ died and is with her friends, and she's left behind to suffer.
Essentially, everything she does is one big effort to 'not think about it'.
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or, you know, Somber'll just sorta sum it up without the psychobabbly stuff I would have put in my blog post. XD
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By being trapped in a tower for more than 3 years?
Occasional visitors once or twice in a month don't help that much.
Heh, nice Deadpool reference there at the end.
Unalived just sounds better than killed or dead.
I'm really enjoying Threnody as a character and her development alongside BlackJack. Keep up the great work Ma'am
I'm really loveing this story so far.
Glitter, why you adorable?
Ouch.
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Oh yes, the chapter entirely spawned by alicorn fart jokes! XD
This bad mystery hay sounds unusually weaponizable...
Having someone around who can physically feel your emotions sounds like it would be a great help hanging onto your sense of self when you have a computer for a body. I can't help but feel like this isn't the last time Threnody will visit the SPP hub. It's good to see it, as well - for all the running around Blackjack did in PH, she never got to meet or check in with Celestia and Littlepip after the skies got cleared. I am a little curious, though; Spike apparently hasn't seen her since her original body croaked, but she acts like she's met Celestia before. As far as I know, the most contact they had was when she sent that warning out on her broadcaster when the SPP hub was getting too close to the Eater.
Either way, time to see what difficulties the Wasteland will throw at this trio on their journey. Given the amount of veteran points Blackjack brings to the table and the fact that poisoning just got used, I have a feeling whatever hardships they encounter will be more emotional in nature, more akin to Pinkie Belle in the original than all Blackjack's messy shootouts and epic dungeons in PH.
*Hits Threnody with newspaper*
No! Bad heartmender!
Hmm, Threnody's not picking up on the signals of where they're going very well.
It'd be like the opposite of the Horizons crew!
You are the worst, lol.
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oh, that made me think of this picture by Goldfur:
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Yay Littlepip
I like it.
I am glad theres toilet humour i need that kind of laughter