The battle of the Hoof ended 9 years ago. For some ponies, the scars are still fresh in the mind. As Threnody, a young heartmender working with the Followers of the Apocalypse will find, sometimes the hardest step is getting a Patient to speak.
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Whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa... what the hell does Sunset Shimmer and the EQG mirror have to do with any of this!?
Whoa...
Reading Peculiar, I can't stop thinking about Gul Dukat from DS9. At stage when latter didn't snapped yet.
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By description it wasn't one.
Besides I'm absolutely certain that Thren came to right conclusion. A mirror as a revelation gateway must be some kind of common enough metaphor.
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Your avatar is perfect for this question but...
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Well that definitely ended on a bit of a cliffhanger!
"out of view whoosed over the crowd"
"out of view whooshed over the crowd"?
"down his snout at with a slight frown"
Down his snout at what?
"the guilty of knowing I was going to"
"the guilt of knowing I was going to"?
"I frowned as a feeling disquiet settled over me"
"I frowned as a feeling of disquiet settled over me"?
"next to rest of the crowd"
"next to the rest of the crowd"?
"I lay my ears back"
"I laid my ears back"?
Well... that was unexpected! :D
Interesting, though. I wonder just what's going on? It seems like Peculiar got into her dreams, but if so, how, and why?
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And that! What?! :D
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:)
Am I the only one who hears Peculiar as Cicero from Skyrim?
Rather unexpected chapter with a cliff hanger to boot. Also, is that Sunset Shimmer and the mirror portal? If so, I assume it is going to be a rather significant plot point. What is up with he chapter title also? Why the sudden Roman numerals?
New Chapter?!
*Sqee Intensifies*
The plot thickens!
Yay! Not dead! XD
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No, no you are not.
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Yes! Yes! Complete with the weird dance like movements and the tacky over the top everything!
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I would hope so. That poor little threnody needs some meat on her bones.
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I... have no idea who that is...
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OMFG I'M DYING
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a character from elder scrolls v: skyrim. imagine a stereotypical court jester, toss in some knarly ptsd and sociopathic tendencies from a tragic and abusive past. a disturbing level of devotion to a mummified corpse known as the night mother. (possible necrophilia?) a (supposedly) vast arsenal of skills and weapons centered around assassination. speaks in a high pitched jovial voice and is quick to become enraged when something is not going his way. He knows quite a few spells from the illusion tree with makes him a little annoying to fight
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what? i like me a nice thick meaty plot.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p8uqcGw3eYE
Be amazed. Or unnerved. Probably unnerved.
Thernody, you have a stalker. A deranged telepathic stalker.
Excuse me!?
Sunset is alive? She's acquainted with Dealer? She's telapthically communicating? So many questions...
Never mind the Equestria Girls mirror. Huh, I wonder if we're going to catch a glimpse of the Fallout games through there...
Well then, that was an interesting little... chapter, hmm... curious.
Good show, Heartshine.
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Only in agitated state (Remember Cicero talking about being stuck?)
I thought that he sound like a switch between Patrick (upbeat) and Jack (upset) from DS9 episode "Statistical Probabilities". The fact that they both were genetically enhanced, mentally unstable savants had contributed to perceived similarity.
I was on pins and needles and shouting on the inside for Threnody to guess the carnival wasn't real and to escape. I was nothing but suspicious that the positive advice he was giving Threnody was just more long-game stuff to break up the group. I would 100% have big aversion to saying even one word to Peculiar or to even look at his expressions because every element of his body language would all be meant to manipulate. Or so I'd fear. And I'd have no confidence in an ability to read his mind when we're in HIS construction!
missing final period.
the guilt.
Although running into a hall of mirrors when you're in a dream trap sure never sounded like a good idea, the appearances Sunset and then the mirror left me astounded and very much excited to discover more
Wow neat chapter
Well i hate peculiar even more. ok hate is a strong word. i despise him even more.
Nobody wants to date a creepy, manipulative psychic, Peculiar.
Ok I’m confused what is the deal with the chapter title? Also dries this mean sunset is in the actual fallout universe.
I really like peculiar as a character. he feels completely unique to me as an antagonist and source of conflict.
That was just plain creepy. Peculiar needs a bullet to the head I think. No, now that I think of it... a full clip.
Well written. I got pulled in and didn't see the end coming. Even with the whole 'open your eyes' bit. I guess I went all 'Tempest' with that phrase, instead of remembering this might be an illusion.
the Frank Pony
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I feel like he's the kind of person you unload a magazine into the head, the heart, both legs, and another magazine into the head, then rig the body with C4 to be sure.
Peculiar makes me uncomfortable.
Ok, I have to say I was wondering if it was a mindscape. I am very intrigued now by the mare in the mirror. And how upset she caused Preculiar to be. Loving the story so far, and have recommended it to a few others.
It made purchasing goods
Sounds more correct for this sentence
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It took me a minute of staring at the sentence to figure out what you were saying was wrong. I realised that it's not clear that I'm using "It's" as short for 'it has' not 'it is'.
Ouch.
My favorite story right now is tainted with equestria girls
Just my luck...........…
Creepy Unicorn is getting even creepier. Not sure why he’s so interested in Thren. If he told the truth about preferring stallions, then he’s not simply lusting after her. Maybe it’s because of her abilities as a heartmender or because of her linage? In any case, it’s a rather unhealthy obsession.
Didn’t expect Sunset Shimmer to show up. I’m curious to learn what happened to her after and during the war. Hopefully it didn’t involve alternate dimensions. Maybe she was in Seaddle stable? Perhaps she used the EQG mirror as soul jar? That would be one way to explain why she’s still alive.
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Watch Heartshine pull a Shyamalan twist and reveal that this story is an Equestria Girl’s Fanfic with everything that happen turning out to be dream. In reality Threnody is a student of Canterlot High and the story is about her getting the courage to participate in a talent show. There’s also a side plot about Blackjack trying to sleep with Prinicpal Celestia to win a bet with her pal Littlepip.
Man, this story is making me homesick for the northwest like nothing else. I miss elephant ears :(. And Ticklemoose with squeaky cheese?
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Tillamook squeaky cheese is amazing. I keep needing to make random sojourns down to the Tillamook cheese factory to get some.
Well, that was a most PECULIAR chapter.
Wait what does "x1" mean?
Very peculiar, indeed.
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I'm almost disappointed no one else has linked this.
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Now that's a story I would like to read.
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Lol
This makes me think of a Beaver Tails! 🤤
They... Made it so stallions can have babies? I... Um... Ooooookayyyyy thennnnn. Cuz that totally isn't gonna mess up any anatomy.
In all seriousness tho, that is pretty interesting.
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I was attempting to imply surrogacy, but MPreg is now 300% funnier.
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oh, my favorite author, Estee, came up with magic that lets two MARES have a baby, BUT...
the resulting foals will ALWAYS be female too!