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Dying light
I'm just a human being who likes human things. I also like complaining that the bus is late.
Dying light
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Gonna need another chapter for a more accurate answer. But liked how it's starting so far.
Nice use of james bond reference on the title
7889041 Thanks, glad someone got that.
Expect the next chapter soon.
Nice start. I look forward to see how it goes.
I can not wait to know what's going to happen next
Small update,
It is going to be finished, just been very busy these past few months.
Hopefully by the start of june. i hope
Psa August: i've had something unexpected come up and thats why it hasnt been updated yet. Its still getting worked on and im about halfway through. Gonna be getting a proofreader soon.
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We understand quite fully. Do things to your own pace, it will diminish your mistakes and lessen your proofreader's burden.
Keep in mind I will kick your ass if you've not push another chapter by the end of this month !!!
My mind's telling me no~!
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But my bodyyy... MY BOOODYYY'S TELLING ME YES~!
what does she mean with "I loved you"??? dammit i got to know
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Soon
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two months soon or a week soon? xD
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I'm already nearly halfway through, the issues I had are long gone now
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that's good to hear man
Although the final chapter was quicker than I'd imagined it being, I enjoyed it.
9 out of 10, needs a good dose of righteous vengeance
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im thinking of doing a follow on one day, but not yet.
Liked and Favorited, without question.
The character building, the detail, the descriptions, everything was amazing. You've made me want to write a Berry Punch story now, and that's how you know you made a great story, when you inspire other writers.
Also, your profile picture is the best.
I'll be keeping a close eye on your works from now on. Well done, well bloody done.
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Thanks, that actually means a lot to me to hear you say that. I was iffy about writing this initially but it's been so well received it's made me want to keep writing.
Anyone interested in proofreading a segment of my new story DM me, im trying a new approach and i want some outside opinion.
Welp, sounded nice enough
Until the her being married part, I'm out
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To each their own i suppose
if berry and goldenwhatever were so happy together, as the story says, him randomly leaving feels kinda like a cheap move to get her and the human together
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i am eventually doing a follow up chapter explaining why he left. Mainly for that reason.
That was kinda good. Short and easy to follow.
The final chapter or the last part of the final chapter felt rushed. Understandable reason why she drunk sex but kinda left the reader in air of why did Gold left her if the marriage was all good. Then after that was all's well that ends well. And Berry's kid called Anon dad in the span of a few weeks.