Although the final chapter was quicker than I'd imagined it being, I enjoyed it.

9 out of 10, needs a good dose of righteous vengeance

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im thinking of doing a follow on one day, but not yet.

Liked and Favorited, without question.

The character building, the detail, the descriptions, everything was amazing. You've made me want to write a Berry Punch story now, and that's how you know you made a great story, when you inspire other writers.

Also, your profile picture is the best. I'll be keeping a close eye on your works from now on. Well done, well bloody done.

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Thanks, that actually means a lot to me to hear you say that. I was iffy about writing this initially but it's been so well received it's made me want to keep writing.

Anyone interested in proofreading a segment of my new story DM me, im trying a new approach and i want some outside opinion.

Welp, sounded nice enough
Until the her being married part, I'm out

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To each their own i suppose

if berry and goldenwhatever were so happy together, as the story says, him randomly leaving feels kinda like a cheap move to get her and the human together

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i am eventually doing a follow up chapter explaining why he left. Mainly for that reason.

That was kinda good. Short and easy to follow.

The final chapter or the last part of the final chapter felt rushed. Understandable reason why she drunk sex but kinda left the reader in air of why did Gold left her if the marriage was all good. Then after that was all's well that ends well. And Berry's kid called Anon dad in the span of a few weeks.