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Megaskullmon


No dictator, no invader, can hold an imprisoned population by the force of arms forever. There is no greater power in the universe than the need for freedom. Babylon Five

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This story is Fully done. I sent the entire story to my editor so I will be releasing these over the time I get them.

Also please if you folks can give respectful criticize em without just going Oh i hate it Dislike like some do.

Remember consistency is key. So in your description choose to either spell the numbers out or write them as numbers, doing both is no no

Liked, followed, and looking forward to more!

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Well more is coming. My Editor and I have been focusing on another story. We will start this up again soon.

Really small nitpick, but titles does not end with periods, names does not end with periods after all.

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Yeah that is a mistake on my part. I do forget about that at times but anyway thanks for reading.

WHY HAS THIS STORY ONLY GOT 84 VIEWS?! :rainbowhuh:

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The counter is screwed up it really has 608 views

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My editor and I only have twenty chapters left for this story. So we will be getting it done as fast as we can.

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Alright dude I hope you enjoyed this chapter and if you wonder where I got the saying at for the end of dream part or mind part here.

" Or I shall remove the rod that filled the egg of my lover in her mother? "

Okay! that's scary!

Thanks to Dragonsix two chapters are ready one has already been posted the next one will be posted int he next few days but we will be editing again some time later.

The synopsis confuses me. Is Tiria dead or alive?

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The Tiria that Star Shooter saw was in her mind. The real Tiria can't speak to her it's just the mind trying to deal with everything.

Chapter is released thank you all for waiting so long.

Okay folks since I learned how to use Grammarly I am going to be editing and then relasing chapters of this story. Now if any chapters need a little fixing my editor and I are going to go back and do them and fix them up. So just in case some things my change in the chapters so you know. So letting you all know so be prepared if you like something but it changes.

ITS DONE!!! after almost three y eras it's done!!

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Now working on Rainfall rainfall will take longer because it's going to be a much longer story.

Could Flap Flap perhaps have been described as a Warrior? The Ultimate Warrior perhaps?

is it necessary to have read the prequel for this or can i read it as is or should i wait for the prequels rewrite?

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You don't have to read Howling Dance to understand this one really. The only thing really is Star Shooter is introduced in Howling dance and she was eight years old.

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