Many years later, Flurry Heart is a young mare with a lot of potential as an Alicorn and a potential Princess. That is if she actually wanted to be one. Unlike her mother and her aunts, she wants to be a normal mare. And when she meets a earth stallion that's anything but ordinary, she has a future to fight for.
I like the idea of the story and how it is written, short but nice. I do feel the characters are out of characters are out of character compared to the show, mainly the other princess' during that last scene. Maybe it could've been your take on how they might have reacted, but to me it felt wrong. Nice story overall though.
- King of Eggs