A look into the world of a firepony. Why is Rescue who he is? Why do firepony do what they do? What insane pony or birdy rushes into a place with nothing but an ax and a hose, when even angels fear tread? This is the story of it all, the why, the who, and the soul that pushes them to stand tall.
This story, the PVFD is dedicated to the hard working men and women of the worlds first responders. May whatever gods exist in the universe, watch over them as they rush to help us in our darkest moments without a thought for themselves.
Now edited by Thunderblast who I can not say thank you enough to.
Character list: List
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Warning: Stallion on Stallion sex happens. You can find that at... Smexy stuff
Side stories found Here
*Arc 1* Chapters 1-10
*Arc 2* Chapters 11-20
*Arc 3* Chapters 21-37
*Arc 4* Chapters 38-47
*Arc 5* Chapters 48-???
Pretty solid story and I'm excited for more. That being said, there's quite a few noticeable errors in here. I'd suggest getting an editor (of course I'm open to do it if you'd like). Not only that, you have WAY too many tags for this story. Other than that it's pretty good. You got my like.
6865805 I would be open to having an editor. Lets talk by private mail here. I agree I am going to pair down one or two of the tags.
So far so good. Still better than Twilight's love story. Waiting for more ^~^
Like where this is going. Short chapters, and to the point. Keep it up.
This story has a firm beginning and a solid background for the development of the character. You can really feel a sense of loss and I look forward to reading more.
Oh there is a romance tag. May I ask what the shipping is? (Not characters just male or female)
7029258 It will be OC and OC for the most part. However there is already a Lyra/Bon-Bon ship in the recent chapters.
This definitely deserves more attention! This chapter has a dark atmosphere (in a good way). I love how Rescue could get over his alcoholic state and back into his feet despite his previous tragedy and made an oath to never falter again.
Overall, nice story! Looking forward for more
...Why not do it now?
7099223 I have been rethinking things, and I may do a "side story" that is the adult stuff, much as a few other writers have done. That way people can decide to read it, or not. If they choose not to, it won't break up the main story line.
Damn ninjas, stop cutting onions in my room!
7167477 I am honored and flattered that you would find such emotion in my story. Believe it or not, there are times I find myself the victim of onion ninja while writing parts of it.
Oh, God... the ninjas are back!
D'aaaaaaaaawwwwwww
You have seriously killed it with the pairing and the behavior of the characters. I find myself reading this and hoping for sequels. Keep up the good work.
7210157 Thank you so much, and this story is slated for 5 Arc's, and I already have the outline for Story two (the foals grown up)
7210231 that's great! You've made the characters so likeable and act very much along what the series has outlined that it would have been heartbreaking to not see more development. If ever you need research done on procedure or anything department related, my father recently attained the position of chief. He's been in that line of work since I was a baby. so about 26 years. I'd have loved to be a firefighter myself but injuries sustained from being in the Army prevent me from following that path.
It's a relief to see a different way of looking at Luna and celestia from groups that tend to have an oath or prayer to their name
7222557 I didn't want to have the EFD look at Luna as a god. A patron, a saint, but not a god.
All right who the hell here is chopping onions again.
7224508 Ninja, Onion cutting Ninja and they are very good. They are, I am told, very sneaky and slip in during your reading of some chapters.
7224532 outstanding work.
I'm not going to cry, I'm not going to cry, I'm not... going to...
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7226570 You don't know what it means to me, that my writing affects you and others so. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for reading my story so far.
This sort of intervention could be what is needed.
Only time will tell if I'm right or not.
7224508 That would be Pinkie
WOW over 270 independent readers of my story so far. I am honored. Thank you all!
7243067 Damnit Pinkie.......
7243267 That, or someone going back to read the story because it's so good.
I've been noticing this... should it not be "until", not "tell" ?
7243997 Thank you, I will try to catch it when I do that. I have been doing it for years and years and its become a bad habit to type.
i thought it was called "The Running of the Leaves"
7226570 Me too!
Here's hoping that the perpetrator is found out, and that no more lives are lost.
('Hoping' being the key word; I've only just got rid of the damn onion ninjas.)
Sick basterd die
7244047 Only for Ponyville, I want the terms/events to cover all of Equestria so that characters from outside Ponyville will have a point of reference too.
Yet another great chapter. I eagerly look forward to the next.
I can only assume that this was Blueblood. What a jerk.
Good chapter, looking forward to more.
The onion ninjas are back, but this time it's for a good reason.
Luna is a bad ass. ALL HAIL THE NIGHT PRINCESS..
7329661 I did the shorter chapters so I could put out 1-2 a week rather than every 2-3 weeks for one. My poor editor can only work so fast LOL!
7329685 Thank you, as you will find when you read, Ailan and Rescue get, closer.
7329795 I realized that error too late >.< I knew the character but I thought of Little Pip the whole time.
Kill him!!!!!!!
7346001 Get in line :P
7346230 *stands there with baseball bat in hand* I ready when you are.
I was expecting (and hoping for) that verdict.
However, I was not expecting that sentence.
Just a suggestion. You should have Archers mom forgive Break as it is what Archer would want her to do because Archer was taught to always forgive others . That should be in the story. Like i said just a suggestion.
7354807 We shall see won't we