To vanquish a particularly troublesome bad guy Celestia called upon the sun's full power. She and Luna saved the day, but unfortunately the experience left her super-sized. Unable to move about without smashing something, Celestia has been indefinitely forced to sit still with nothing to do. Luna hatches a plan that will hopefully cheer her sister up and even get used to being huge.
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Just a fun little story to stretch my writing muscles again. Not that there's much to stretch, ha. It pulls heavily from Blobskin’s mature story 7 Days of Macro Dreams but doesn't have much to offer in the way of lewd-ness. Sorry, guys - I hope you can dig it anyway.
Graciously edited by Habitual!
Chapters (2)
good and pure
A most splendid chapter. I would ask for another, but I fear it would mar the precious atmosphere you have created. All in all, well done.
I honestly thought that's what this was at first, and just clicked on this out of morbid curiosity like I usually do to confirm if I'm right or not. I may or may not check this out later. But for now, I'm way too tired. Or at least, I should be.
Edit: it's also technically against the rules to have a link to a mature fic in the description of a story rated "Everyone."
Nice and heartwarming "little" chapter. I want to see how it continues
Though, a few things are bothering me... First, why do you write two spaces between the words? And second, the sentence about Luna in the short description doesn't have the best wording.
I have 'big' expectations for this fic.
7802037 Whoa - thanks for the heads-up! All set there.
7802053 I was told that dual-spaces make things a little easier to read. Is it jarring? I can fix it in no time! Don't pay the description no mind - it's just silly like this story.
7802160
Lol! I think I misspoke on that advice to you.
I meant
To skip a line
Like this
Which is what you did already
Instead of spacing
your lines
like this
which is harder to read
in large blocks
of text
7802160 More unusal than jarring... However, when you mistype and leave there 3 spaces, it gets quite annoying.
Still, the description should be silly in the same way as the story is. You have very neat descriptions for everything. I don't thing that "because she's cool like that" is a good representative
7802160 amazing! Cant wait for the next chapter
This might be a good fic, I'll look foward for more.
Will we find out what happened to the unfortunate villain who had to face down a titanic Celestia?
I can't help but think she just casually sat on them, for some reason. XD
7802173 Oh, whoops! OK I think I got it now. Shoot - sorry about that!
7802385 I hope folks like what comes down the chute.
I really like giant/tiny pony stories so I can't wait to see where this story goes.
Too short for me to read just yet, but i wanted to say that this is a good advertisement.
7802160
Yeah, don't want an admin coming in and going, "You can't do that!"~ and then you go,
"No! No please!"
Well, maybe not exactly like that, but I like to imagine that.
I also remembered that this story had to pass moderation. So the person was probably swamped or in a rush if they didn't check that link and tell you to remove it. But it doesn't matter now, since it's been fixed and someone won't call a mod on you without telling you to fix it first.
Just teleport Tia to go visit the Yaks.
This is a really neat story.
Looks like fimfic is still doing that thing where it's fucking up the bold tags. You'll need to go in manually and fix it, I'm afraid.
7806627 Huh, I wonder why. Italics work just fine. Weird. I think I got them.
Not sure. It does it for me, too.
Awesome! Love the “programming“ of the dreamworld.
That's was kind of funny.
7807213 "Operator!"
"What do you need?"
"Cottages. Lots of cottages."
*rows of tiny houses come rushing in from the infinite white distance*
7808324 Dang, tha'd be a great reference, haha.
7808324 haha, lol! Is there anything better than sciency magic?
Nice and funny build-up chapter, this gonna be an interesting ride!
ooh, yay. update
When is the next update it's been months.
7808571
I miss you...
8243356
According to his tumblr, he'll be back in a couple of weeks.
8352738
Ok thanks i don't have tumblr.
8352770
Untill recently, i didnt use tumblr either, but you should check his out! There is a comic version of this story, among other things, and you dont need an account yourself, if you just want to watch (big-pon.tumblr.com)
I would love to see more of this story.