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Ivory Piano


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Shelves aren't the only place Twilight Sparkle keeps books. In her room, beneath her mattress, lies a hidden enclave of romances that have rarely seen the light of the sun. Maybe she's read a few too many romance books before bed because, just as much as the characters in those books, she's in love. If only the author of those romance books could help her.

It's a good thing she knows the author. She just doesn't know it yet.

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Another Big Mac shipfic by the master! I think it says something about the quality of your work that I favorite and like stories before I've even read them, and I have yet to have that habit go wrong.

This one had me in stitches, and I am really looking forward to seeing it develop

Ah, this hits me right in the heart. I know what it's like to have that kind of crush. Hope it turns out better for Twilight than it did me.

Definitely looking forward to more, no matter how it turns out.

I feel like Twilight should now be worried about Rarity having a new book idea about the current situation. The story is practically writing itself in front of her eyes. All Rarity has to do is wait.

Twilight traced her finger across the golden lettering embossed above the artwork.

Unless it was a finger made from a magical construct I would recommend correcting this. But that was the only thing I found out.

A wonderful start, I'm really loving this already. Then again, there isn't a story from you that I haven't loved yet.

The romance writer, oblivious. The one crushing on him, hopeless. I wonder how long it will take for this to work out.
Also Rarity's smile fading that one time when Twi mentioned Mac's name. That was a bit suspicious. Then again, no surprise that more have their eyes set on him.

Then one goes crazy and cannabalizes the other.

:rainbowlaugh:
Way to kill the mood. One might think he does it intentionally as he's way too aware of what's happening.

Also, it's cannibalize, not cannabalize. (so I lied, those were two things I found out for corrections).

Still, absolutely can't wait for more :twilightsmile:

This is certainly relevant to my interests.

Looking forward to more!

I'm enjoying this so far. It has a bit of an alternate universe feeling to it, with the library still existing despite post-season 4 references, and also the complete lack of Spike or any mention of him. I don't mind these touches though.

It makes sense that Rarity would know Macintosh better than Twilight, what with their time together in the Ponytones. I do wonder if that is all of it or not, though, based on her reaction.

Once you finish writing this, maybe check out Gekkan Shoujo Nozaki-kun. Premise is similar.

Hmm... I'm feeling like there's a bit more to the Rarity/Mac interaction than she lets on. You love to tease us with marshmallow romance.
And a Patreon too, eh? I'll have to sign up for that.

Sometimes, I look at the front page and think, wow, fanfic is dead.
And then I find stories like these, and my faith is restored.

Okay, I feel forced to ask this question. Is Mac's reason for writing similar to your own? I just have to know now or my curiousity will eat at my brain until I go to bed.

Are you going to write a different story for every possible Big Mac ship? Because I would be totally ok with that.

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