Mac has dedicated his life to the farm, to his sisters, and Applejack feels bad for it, she feels it's time for her brother to star having fun again to have a life beyond his work, friends and even more, but she isn't going to let him go just with any other mare, no, she need something good and harmless.
Then there's Rarity, ever since the coronation she's been work on multiple designs for multiple clients, and she hasn't seen much of her friends ever since either, or done any other thing that isn't working.
For Applejack it was a matter of putting one and one together. A flawless harmless plan.
(half way trough editing)
Chapters (1)
To many grammatical errors. Giving a thumbs down because of that. Sorry.
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Going to check that out, thanks
Mmmm.. RariMac, such an underated ship, nice to see more.
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I know, I know...
I try to do my part
love the story
I will give this a chance, putting it into read later list.
Loved it!!! *squee*
Though what about Mr. Mustache over here?? --->
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I think he might be a good looser, Spike is that kind of guy too, good hearted. If I have a chance, he'll show up.
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YAY!!!
Aside from a few grammatical errors, I'm liking it so far. I just love this pairing
I love this story, but GOD DAMN THIS NEEDS SOME EDITING!
I'm still going to follow this^^
You have great ideas and a nice story, but you need an editor^^
I'm seeing some serious potential here and i want to know what happens next. Grammer and editing have been touched on already and those are hardly my specialty, but overall a solid read.
You told me to comment to see if I liked it...So...I'm here to say that I liked it!
This is a very well paced romance story. I really like how Rarity is portrayed. Occasional grammatical issues, but that can be fixed. Dialogue is in character. Are you going to make this clop, cause you seem to know what you're doing with this writing stuff.
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No, no clop
lotus is, well, especial
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Aw... you would have probably done a good job at it. Do you think you could release a chapter, separate from the story?
Hmm,Rarity x Mac fics are rare(pardon the pun) on this site in comparison to other Macships(aside from LunaMac and CeletiMac) and I enjoyed it because it's something different. So thanks for this 1st chapter to a enjoyable story.
noice