Mechanical Thing-a-ma-giggers are always fun, unfortunately for me, mine are mostly illegal. See I'm an Engineer, or a Mechanical Mechanicist, which is much more fun to say. Things where going so well, until when the adoptive sister of Princess Twilight, and the unofficial daughter of Princess Celestia, showed up at my house. Her name? *Sigh* Her name was Barb. And the worst part about this entire thing, was that she was hot.
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Say you have it, if they want a weapon give them one!
(Keep writing my friend.)
Keep writing fucker.
7792687 Most inspirational thing I have ever seen, and thank you!
Keep it up fucker.
Remember kids just say no.
And this is exactly why I love comments!
Hold them hostage with the nuke.
Dis is good
Dis is nice
I love the direction the story's going, but you go into excruciating detail on seemingly random things and then completely skip over important dialogue. You're getting a thumbs-up because I believe that this story has amazing potential and you get the credit it deserves, but unfortunately I will not be reading any more chapters simply because of the aforementioned detail issues. That being said I wish you good luck and a GOOD DAY SIR!
7856154 Thank you for the constructive criticism, it's one of the most uplifting things I can read, and now thanks to you I know what I have to work on to make this story better for the other awesome people who read this. And you have and good day to you as well kind sir!
P.S. If you can, can you give me some examples of what you stated needs work on. If that's not to much to ask that is.
I see only three ways that can be taken, question, where was he when he said that?
7865258 Sorry, but what do you mean by your comment? I don't mean to sound rude, but I just don't understand.
7865362 I mean where was The engineer when he said "So, want to go get something to eat?”
7865524 He was sitting on his couch. The most important piece of furniture in the entire house!
7865554 ok then...the way should be taken~Let's get some food
The way it may be perceived~SEXY SOFA TIME!!!
Let the fun times begin!
Also known as the time where we readers can laugh plenty
Will this story have sex in it?
Panda Skies is a weird name, even for a pony. How did you come up with it?
8092288 The reason I picked this name is because at first, when I was writing the first few chapters the name Panda Skies was just a place holder because, well, I like Pandas, but as time went on it felt weird to call the main protagonist anything else so I kept it. Plus I think the name fits him, he's a plain and average guy, an earth pony with a (somewhat cliche) black and white color scheme, so in my mind having an, in my opinion, exotic non-cliche name like Panda Skies just seem right.
Also sorry about being late with this response.
I'll bet that's Discord laughing.
8093365
Maybe...
You hear laughter because we are angry you have not posted in a while and it is driving us and you to insanity.
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That...could very well be the cause.
Sorry, but he's just too soft for a black market arms/equipment dealer.
hay why stop the story there why not continue it a bit more