840189 And when Royal all pronouns are capitalized, Us, We, Our, etc.
The new line for new character speaking is extremely important. It let's you use less of "he she it said" and makes it easier for the reader to decide who is talking before hitting the "he she it said" spot.
Either way, I like the synopsis- so I think I'll keep reading to see what happens.

840189 Meh, I'm not used to this website's interface, as I wrote it for the sole purpose of use for Google Docs which had been my starting ground. And of course, this was one of my first and earlier fics, so as you can imagine I wasn't a real Shakespeare. I had also planned on re-visioning most of the fics for use on tablets (webOS, Android, iOS, etc.) but I had't gotten around to it.

Anyway, thanks for the advice, I'll make a note of it. Nice to have some advice givers around here :)

is this the end comon you can add a few more chapters its a great story can't quit now

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Yes, I'm sorry but this is the end of this story. BUT, I've been told to write a sequel, so that is exactly what I'll do! I'm glad you each enjoyed the story so much, and I truly hope that I will be able to continue to please you with the power of words.

Thank you all for your amazing feedback on this story! As I've already had a couple of people suggest I do a sequel or add more chapters (I see these as the same things in this case "Derpy Forever" and "crazypony26"), so that is exactly what I've planned to do. I promise you I'll get to work on it as soon as possible my fellow bronies.

All that aside, I really cannot thank you all enough for reading this and leaving this much amazing feedback! It means the world to me and is the sole reason that I will happily continue to write for your sole enjoyment.

You guys are amazing, and keep on reading.

"The greatest success goes to the person who is not afraid to fail in front of even the largest audience." - Bill Hewlett, cofounder, Hewlett-Packard.

This one's for you guys, keep on creating. You all have amazing capabilities

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thank you sooo much!!!
we (or i) will wait for a sequel or more chapters

Yay.. the epilogue was great.. made me dry my tears a little..

Being a huge TwiLuna ship fan, I love any and all TwiLuna fanfics. I have read some good, some /okay/, and some ones that need work. You fall into that category of beyond good. This had me enticed and left me wanting more with each chapter. The romance intertwined with the abundant sex made this quite a delicious story to read. Sequel, please please please! You are a fantastic writer, the story of Twilight and Luna's love cannot go unfinished! Thanks for the great read though, favorited, downloaded, and watching.

848781 Thank you ever so much! It's the good people and supporters like you that I write for. I am very happy that you enjoyed it!

You've done what you can't always expect will happen: make a wonderful love story intermixed with tons of sex. Congratulations.

I CANNOT wait for the sequel!

As most definitively not a novice of TwiLuna fics i have to say that this, though short, is amazing and i hope that you do in fact write a sequel.

Very cute fic i love the way it started. Love the way you did luna.

I hope you write a squeal to this.

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Glad you liked it! And yes, I'm planning a sequel very soon.

More cloppy than i was expecting but still well written.
There may need a clop tag if there will be as much sex in the sequel.

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I don't think I ever thanked you for your words. How selfish of me...

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I know that. If you'd have scrolled down through the comments you would have seen that others have notified me of it. This was very early in my writing and I didn't know all of what I was doing and since I was occupied with bigger and better things I never bothered to correct it. All is as should be in my newer works. Thank you for pointing it out though.

2804412 ok, im sorry if i had managed to upset you in anyway it was just a friendly reminder, that ended up being not-so friendly, sorry bout that.....

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No, no, no, no! Did I sound harsh? Oh goodness I'm sorry, I didn't mean to! I was up late in the night doing some work, so tired as you can imagine, and I really did try to respond nicely. I really do appreciate the reminder! Once you get to know me I'm not as big of a monster as that comment tried to paint me out to be. Are we cool?

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Yikes! Now that I read it I do sound like a jerk. You have my most sincere apologies

2806421 yea bro, we're awesome! i was in the same boat last night as well, so no hard feelings!

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Awesome! You seem like a cool person to get to know, so I just went ahead and decided to watch you

2806496 Awesome! but....I don't really do much, all I do is help my friends write their stories and read/fix (if needed) other peoples stories, so you wont learn much. , but I am thinking about writing a story of my own I just don't know how its gunna' work out.

2806496 and you seem like a pretty cool person too!

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Hey, I'm sure you'll do fine! We all have amazing capability! All you've gotta do is have a little faith my friend

2806652 Wow, thanks!

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You're very welcome!

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Oh yeah! Should have mentioned this earlier, but if you need any assistance with that story feel free to call upon me! I'd be glad to help you out

2831328 thanks, if I need it you will be the first person I go to!

843532 dude please make a sequel or another chapter because I have read almost all of your other books and I really want to read more

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As I said, they're on their way!

Can't wait for the next Chapter!

Is there going to be more?

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At some point, yes, there will be :) Yes indeedy! A sequel to "Rarity's Romance" is coming first, but the sequel to this is likely to follow unless I notice some kind of burst in activity to "A Week With Fluttershy". Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoyed

sequel please. this is a great story

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Glad you like it! Yes, I have been working on a sequel but its sadly just been a slow time coming.

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I understand that.

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Thanks for the follow! You're awesome!

Could you make a sequel pls (if you want I could help) or if you need help in general