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I am an Anti-Brony, I hate MLP, so why am I here? Read this...! https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/769267/if-im-an-anti-brony-why-am-i-on-this-site

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While visiting Manehatten, Rarity ends up getting on the bad side of a fashion pony who bans her from his store and treats her very hostile.

It soon discovered that he is in fact an old friend of hers from long ago... whom she wronged very badly.

LESSONS:

1: You should never betray a friend for personal gain.

2: Friendship and Trust-- once broken-- cannot always be restored.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 20 )

Well. This one ended a bit better but it still puzzles me.

7755606 Well.......Hmm......... I guess...... something about it.

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Friendship still failed. Manny does not wish to rekindle his friendship to Rarity. Not now, not ever, and that really hurts her, especially considering it was her fault this happened.

...She may be unbanned from his store, but that doesn't exactly mean a thing in the friendship field.

7776390 And yet, these Friendship is Failure story your making has been making me puzzle a bit.

Haha that no rarity sign reminds me of a story that has a human that placed a no alicorn sign

Manny somewhat liked this, when customers crowded to buy his works. However, he spotted Rarity off near the back, and his happiness changed into a sneer as he looked at her. She did not notice him, which he didn’t mind, and walked into an alley to enter his store from the backside.

Wasn’t he just scared of her last chapter?

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What story was that?

Did he dip himself in paint or something?

“Please don’t call me that.” Manny cut in “And… my decision is my own priority: I want Rarity nowhere near my shop, near me, or anything in my life at all.” He looked back at his blank flank, “That’s the main reason I had my cutiemark permanently removed! I want anything that was ever to even slightly do with Rarity out of my life!”

How is that even possible?

“Look, I get where you’re comin’ from and all that.” said Applejack “Rarity told us all about it--you and the dress, and all that-- but surely it ain’t worth holdin’ a grudge on her for this long.”

Nope, it is.

Manny explained how Rarity had not only lied about taking his dress and patenting it as her own, but when he called her out on it, in public in front of witnesses, she denied the truth—put on one of her sop stories to make it look like she was the victim.

You cannot be serious.

“Pinkie Pie.” snapped Twilight “Look, I’m not saying it’s not possible, but I’m saying just don’t get ahead of yourselves. You can’t just force someone to be your friend.”

Is she really saying that after the last story?

Rarity hung her head low “You may be right, Twilight, but… I really just want to make it up to Needle… or rather Manny. I don’t’ want him to loathe and despite me for the rest of his life.”

I think that’s the problem right there.

Good things did happen, for Manny at least. During the past few days, he made copies of the clothes from the fashion show and sold them to many customers, and he received many offers to have his fashion-lines featured in papers, magazines, and even on large billboards.

How was he able to make copies?

I know what we’re trying to do, and I’m afraid it does not erase what you did to me in the past. I will cease my hostilities with you and your friends, but I cannot simply put it all we have been through behind me, nor can I simply forgive and forget like that. That is something for me to decide on my own accord.

That’s good.

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Is she really saying that after the last story?

The FIF's are not connected...

Comment posted by Im bad deleted Jul 1st, 2023

I love how you put red text in the descriptions of the "Friendship is Failure" series. It gives us some hints on what has gone bad or made things worse for the pony that has been wronged. But what happened? How, what, why? Only way to find out is to read along and experience the car crash!
Oh boy, I'm so excited! :raritystarry:

She imagined how lovely she’d look in it and stallions all over would treat her like a princess--offering her gifts, kissing her hoofs and cheering, “Hail Rarity! Hail Rarity! Hail Rarity!”

“Hey, Rarity! Hey, Rarity…!” Applejack called to her snapping her out of her daydream, “The line’s movin’. Shake a leg, girl.”

Hehe, I like that part.

(This music in a montage)

Adding some music here makes me feel it in the moment! Also music is really nice, gonna search it up and add it to my bookmarks maybe!

The reason there were no charges and re-openings of the case: Needle had disappeared from Ponyville. He had gone missing several days before Rarity’s confession and had not been seen since. Not a single pony knew where he had gone.

Poor Needle... At least Rarity told the truth, but she really shouldn't have took the credit of the dress in the first place... Thank god she is a changed pony now due to friendship! (or at least I hope she changed!!!)

Indeed, Pinkie went all around, checking ponies’ faces, asking for directions to places she didn’t know. She even confronted a baby in his carriage…

“Okay, Tiny… where is he? Have you seen him? Where did he go? Tell me! TELL ME!!”

The baby just cooed and honked her nose without a care in the world, while his mother was very annoyed and walked away with her son in the carriage.

Oh my gosh, that is so Pinkie. I love you do the funny parts in the series! It feels like it came from an actual MLP episode, keep up the good work!

Manny Collars really went through a lot. Heck, he even started over, working in a tailor shop to climb to where he is now! I'm happy is successful. His grudge against Rarity is valid imo, and it's going to be hard to forgive her. I wonder how these ponies are gonna mess up this time to make this friendship a failure! :pinkiecrazy:

I love how you described the clothes in this story, I can just imagine how pretty they are :raritystarry:
It was sweet of Manny to give Rarity the Fiery Heart gown she wanted. Sucks a bit Manny wasn't able to reconcile with his friendship with Rarity, but hey, at least things didn't get worse! :twilightsheepish:

Thanks for the story! To the next part of the series I go!

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