I enjoy writing. Is there much else to say? Nothing you'd be interested in I'm sure.
Lemon Zest: Crystal Prep student, Friendship Games participant, and apparently vandal. Though an straight 'A' student she's never exactly been an inside the box thinker. It only comes to reason that her choice of pass time would be, for lack of a better word, unorthodox. Unfortunately for everyone else she's decided to use the whole city as her canvas. But unfortunately for her she's crossed the wrong apple farmer.
Another parody story. This time of Looney Tunes: Daffy's Doodles.
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Well, it's a funny concept, but... why? Breaking the fourth wall to tell the narrator doesn't count as an explanation, that's just jarring. Usually you'd want at least some sort of reason to go vandalize an entire town big enough to have skyscrapers, even if it's something as silly as a bet or a dare. Comedies should be silly, but they do at least need to make sense.
Groping, even if accidental, probably also isn't something you want in an E-rated fic.
7730104 You know i honestly wasn't thinking about that. I'm gonna fix that right now.
As for the narration I was just playing off the source material, But I guess it would have worked no problem If I'd have used Pinkie Pie. I have a fast paced style of writing and I guess it doesn't always come off as well to others as it does to me. Thanks.