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Where did all these followers come from? >_>

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This has piqued my interest.

very nice, im looking forward to see how this plays out

The xenophobic ponies will have what's coming to them!:moustache:

This.....is going to be good:pinkiecrazy:

A Kangaroo court.

The human never stood a chance.

Though i am disgusted that this kangaroo court has left our dear Human to hang, i am confident that Karma will 'reward' the ponies in the end, and dearly so.

Ryan should come out like Doomguy and tear up the place. Just kidding, but in all reality he should become horribly aggressive. If it were to happen to me, and I got brought back from Tartarus, I would move out of Equestia or isolate myself in the Everfree or Winter Wastes. That and avoid all contact with all ponies.

Though I would accept his wife for being an acception, but even then it's going to be altered and damaged in some way. No one would be able to walk away after that without major psychological problems. (Like depression and/and large amounts of aggression)

This is a very interesting concept I would love to see more of it

Good start, Please make more when you can.

So thats how equestria version of doomguy was created

so....whos the wife? what did she look like? What pony type was she? Not to mention-- what did Ryan look like? any thing to note of him? Not to mention how long these two were married for as well as any idea of how they came together? Sorry if my questions seem off-- but, if you want to make characters that are the main focus-- we should at least know what they look like and not imagine 'blanks' of their forms and up to our imagination.

It seems kinda... rushed. There's no real build-up or setup, and we don't know much of anything about the characters, certainly nowhere near enough to be invested in them. They're practically blank slates with names.

Right now, it feels like a barebones "evil ponies get what's coming to them after mistreating the human" fic, with no real substance beyond that. It could have something more to it, but the almost complete absence of any character to the characters makes it hard to care about them or think of them as anything but shallow plot devices.

7712682 the story will be a flashback story of the human and the ponys try make him forgive them as plan his payback on the races country. because they made this monster

“Human,” Celestia reverberated, “You stand accused of three separate counts murder, child abuse, and mayhem.”

Ryan: i plead guilty to the charge of mayhem, because yea that was probably me. but i plead innocent to the charge of murder, because there is no way you found enough of the bodies to be able to tell what species they were let alone enough to be able to trace them back to me.

“YOU!” The distressed mare screeched.

Ryan: YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please continue this story, it intrigues me on what'll happen next.

Really interested. Please more.

Can somebody continue this?

7887376 this story is deader that the dinosaurs bro.

Interested... Thou it seems "bit" rushed.

WE NEED UPDATES! WE WANT TO SEE HOW BAD CELESTIAS FUCKED UP

Dead and dead. Figures.

Wait........a partner? As in.....horse f***ing? (Don't care you worthless haters)

Never did see an update.

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Everyone point at it and laugh. It's the only way it'll learn.

Nice story. Can't wait for next chapter

Yo. When do we get an update?

will you not going to continue with this story, because I am very intrigued to know what happens with the mistake the princess made in blaming an innocent

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As many have said.... This story is dead.
I believe that no one would deny that the story is now up for grab, if someone wish to continue it.
Considering when the last time the author was logged in...

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bro this shit deader than dying STARS

Hi how long does it take for the update on this story?

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