Stella finds a new world full of wonders, what starts as pure research becomes something life changing for her.
There are stories with characters dance around each other and finding each other just at the end of the story... this is not one of them. The focus is on their relationship.
"sex" tag because of all the sexual innuendo, without writing explicitly what they are doing.
There is now a mature version if you want explicit sex scenes. For science (mature version)
Picture made by the very talented PriDark (commission)
Chapters (43)
oh oh why are you taking a tranq gun i know you dont know whats there but this..... this will end badly
7731106 like shooting it on the least frightening creature ever?
looks good so far, hope I see more.
7731212 I'm in the middle to the next chapter, I hope to stick to my two chapters a week plan. This will be my longest story anyway, Twilight only first appears 8000 words in. :-)
Ha I love it lol Dash you fiend
Yeah... if a project like this actually existed there's no way it would be analyzed by only one person. There'd be likely dozens if not hundreds, and the whole compound would be covered in military personnel. I see where you're going with this, but you need to make it a bit more believable. Maybe have the people in charge fretting over what to do with the information for a while, and have the protagonist choose to break in and go through against their wish. Just... something that involves more story than just "I wanna go through that portal now please."
I like it lol this might get a fav later on I'm curious about this romance tag as far as i can tell she's been neutral to all the girls so far it's refreshing to see a build before they start liking someone instead of straight forward "your amazingly beautiful u too" dating story.
I love the cheese of the story and I'm excited to see where it goes
And one more thing I noticed some mistakes but nothing to big, just spelling here and there and one or two grammatical errors, but all and all if you can add to two u can read it... Great Job
7731465 well, I did my best to make it sound boring. A 96% change to find nothing at all in the next 100 years. I hope I get some credit for not using the "got-hit-by-lightning-wake-up-in-equestria" method ;-)
7731498 Thanks a lot for all these nice words. It's hard for me as an non-native speaker to catch all errors. I re-read all my stories every two months and I always find new misspellings, I swear they are multiplying. I would be very happy if you could tell me my errors.
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As for u being a non native English speaker you right very well
lol what is ur natural language if u don't mind me asking?
and I will try I normally don't I notice them and people are usually very quick to tell you I am not a expert using this comment box yet 
but I will try if I can 
7731661 other guy lol
but yes he's right and that may help lol
7731666 your right, I have to correct that. I'm german.
7731465 you know, your right, I should add at least a few guards and a key card reader or eye scanner. I will do that, thanks.
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Nice lol second German brony I met on here lol I proofread for him and I notice the same problem it's in translation and words are confusing in English even more so in American English lol
but ur doing well and u get props in my book for the whole adding a bunch of filler before you hit that romance tag (Rainbow doesn't count lust isn't love lol) and that lightning comment was so true 
The Prime Directive never stood a chance...
7731734 who could with Fluttershy involved :-)
7731698 well, I decided this time to give the story all the time it needs. I won't rush it, if that means it will become twice or ten times as big as my previous stories, so be it. I have written an overarching plot for the first half of the story a few days ago and not even a single point of it is checked of yet :-) The first plot point will be in the chapter after the one I am writing now.
I know you are not from America, but I agree you write very well for not being a native here.
Also I think horses and ponies have teats instead of udders. Udders are the mammaries of a cow.
Love the story!! More chapters soon!!
Whoever dislikes this story can go get dropped in the Pegasus Device.....
*Follows and Favs this story and gives it a thumbs up*
7731821 I actually did some research on that... not the rule 34 & E621 research, I mean I searched for diagrams and read about sicknesses horses could get. I found both, things like "you have to apply the cream to the horses udder" as well as texts about "teats". I even ask one of my prereaders about it. Maybe we should do a poll :-) I think it's fine as long as they talk about Stella's breasts, since they have cows in their world too and I could see them comparing them to udders for that reason but I REALLY want to know what word is right for ponies. Or are teats just the nipples on their udders. Anyone good in biology here?
7731830 Actually I was surprised not to get a dislike much earlier. It's not normal to get 27 likes in a row. It's just not possible to have everyone like a story, tastes are different. But thanks for your kind words.
7731893 I took biology in highschool and I could have sworn they called them teats
7731907 here they call them udders How to clean a mare's female parts and I get more Google hits for "Horse udders" then "horse teats"... the things I do "for science" ;-) I let it be udders until we know for sure.
7731927 gotcha
7731824 *boop* here is the next one.
*beep* I'm here
7732005 well done young padawan
Chapter 1 now with 100% more security guards ;-)
Keep these chapters coming, I stop writing my story just to read these
7732085 well, I will never be able to write faster then you read ;-)
Next chapter should be ready in two to three days.
This is something special.
Stella should download Wikipedia and show that to Twilight.
I'm going to go read one of your other stories.
This is soo good. 10/10
*squeeeee* LOVE IT!!! MORE SOON!!!
7732461 i already looked into that, the version without pictures is about 8.5GB... Well the german at least, so with a solar charger it would be feasible but there will be other problems soon that could make it hard to do.
I am really blown away from all this positive feedback... and a bit scared.
When the first story appeared in my mind (Little Shockwaves) , I thought : 'I really should write that and looked if fanfiction allowed german stories...' , it didn't. I already have to much hobbies taking my time, you can see some of them at my Art account . So I thought it was a stupid idea anyway...
But I really wanted to get it out on (digital) paper.
'Whatever I write it in english... people will hate it and I can get back to my other projects...' not to forget my twin daughters who need attention too.
I started to write it, submitted what was ready so far and I got a 50/50 love / hate rate, just what I expected. But from the comments I found people were upset about the part were she acts completely out of character "Luna would never do that". For course she would because she is... oh... the readers don't know what is in my mind and will be obvious a few chapters later.
I learned to see things from the perspective of the reader and love all feedback pointing out flaws and story holes... I hate story holes and will not allow then, everything happens for reasons. I added things in earlier chapters to make it visible earlier to the reader, so he/she knew there was something that caused her to react that way.
And things changed, suddenly feedback got mostly positive by a large margin and people asked for a sequel on I finished the story. That was unexpected.
So I waited for a new idea to form in my head. Do anyone of you know the movie "Enemy mine"? I guess you are all to young for knowing it. It was the inspiration for "Know your Enemy".
Funny thing is this second story was never meant to end the way it did, but at some point the characters demanded it to get this way, this might sound stupid. I envision how the characters would react to the situations and often they react in an other way as my story arc was planned. So I listen to the characters and change the story arc.
... Why the hell am I writing all this down?
... guess I just wanted it to be out too.
... I really should have written this as a blog instead of a comment, oh well I copy it over and have it at both places.
The short version is:
I am blown away by that amount of positive feedback but I am a bit frighten about how many people read my 'just for fun, let's mess with some characters' stories. I try to lock these thoughts out when I write, pretend only a view will read it and half of these will hate it anyway, so why not make Dashie funny in this story, who cares.
At the same time I love every single feedback, all of it, not just the positive ones. Everything helps me grow, even the discussions about "have ponies utters or teats", I want to have everything right.
I should really stop now an make lunch for my daughters. Bye.
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And I thank you for taking your time
proper story needs a decent flow rushing out will only confuse people I'm glad to have met a author who understands that 
I will await patiently for the next chapter...
But because I have to put my two cents in I believe everything is up to the writers we shouldn't be nitpicking a story because it is up to the writers imagination and creativity to how to present a story to us (steps down from soapbox)
sorry I had to say it keep up the good work 
7733319 thanks a lot again. Of course I don't incorporate everything a reader suggests into my stories, but if something suggested is better then what I have thought of, I'm not afraid to say it's better then my idea and in the end it is all about making the story as good as possible. Of course I would never change something to alter the tone of the story.
wow... that was fast...
*start reading the chapter*
7734482 well it's weekend and there wasn't much else to do... and it was fun.
7734484 there is some parts referring Stella as him, don't know if is a typo or purposeful.
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I also noticed this.
7734502 Oh, thanks for telling me, I will correct it.
7734562 It should be fixed now, thanks.
Would love another chapter!
Or everyone could decide she's insane.
Oh yeah..ponies have a thing about clothes. That makes the HiEs so much more interesting.
Decisions like this are how you tell a smart character from a dumb one.
It's also how you avoid the usual "stuck in Equestria" problem present in most HiE fics.
I can kinda guess the next one
... If it's different it'll surprise me 
all and all good chapter noticed some stuff but nothing someone else will or already say lol anyway I await the next chapter with excitement 