A new town, a new life, a new school. Your parents got you your very own apartament for you to live in and finally get some independance from them. They of course enlisted you to one of the best schools in town since they want you to have the best eduaction there is, but there is a cost to having such a great education.
Crystal Prep Academy is not really known to be too social and accepting to strangers, but there are some students who are not as bad as they look once you get to know them, who knows, maybe you can get more than just a friend?
Warning: Violance, Innapropiate Language, Bullying, Blackmailing and a few other minor things. The list might grow as time goes on. Sex tag is there for suggestive content and conversations.
Got inspired to try and write my own fics by Holy You should totally go check their stories if you want some quality content.
Looks promising
Wow this is good
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Thank you, this is just the beginning
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I have this story planned so far, along with a few sequels, I hope everyone enjoys it
Dont stop! Don't stop this story! Please tell me this story has no brakes
I like it! Your story is great so far!
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I have a few chapters and sequels planned out. If people really enjoy my work, I might extend it even further
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Thank you very much! Next chapter should be up by wednesday!
I'm impatient so I want it every two hours instead of two days lol, but that's just me so the sooner the better.
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2 hours is a bit too much for me really. I could rush it like that, but then the story and pretty much everything would suck. I am trying to make the best that I can, but still it's a bit hard considering this is my first story and I am still not sure if this pleases people or I should improve even further. Maybe in the future I will be able to write every one day instead? Is that good enough?
You mean- doing some homework
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Oops, my bad. Guess I did not proof read this chapter enough. Thanks for letting me know
First paragraph perfectly describes why I hate CPA. (just saying my opinion)
Nice chapter man. Loved the part when Anon and Twilight became friends. Lemon is willing to give Anon a 2nd chance? Great! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Good chapter, but I just thought it was weird he wanted to be friends with Lemon Zest again after she and the others dumped him over something so minor. Personally, I wouldn't want to associate myself with people like that, but that's just me i guess
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Trying to keep it as accurate to the movie as I can so far, I will branch off eventually after the games.
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It should be up hopefully by tomorrow if I manage to get it down fast enough! Glad you are liking the story!
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It was just a small slip on Lemon's side. I personally believe everyone deserves a second chance no matter what, so I am applying that logic here as well
7543955 Makes sense I will admit it's hard for me to give someone a second chance
I know it!! When I read the first paragraph!!
Great job
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Thank you! More will be coming soon
Ah sweet a new chapter! Loved the part where Twilight helped Anon.
wish I could help you with proof reading and everything but english isn't my first language either.
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Well I do plan on working with this friendship as well, that will help me branch towards more characters when eventually we reach CHS and Twilight leaving Crystal Prep.
No worries about proof reading. Some people are already intrested, We'll see how it goes in the future! Enjoy the fic!
Poor Anon. He didn't mean to hurt you Twilight, he really sees you as a good friend.
You know this chapter reminded me of my chapter of my OC in Crystal Prep. I had a Déjà vu moment.
A WWII assignment? I myself could do it solo. If i really tried I'd be living in that time, I love researching the battles, weapons and tactics!
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Well, I was wondering if I should do this before or after the game. I thought it would be more logical for this to happen before the games! And I'm glad you could relate this to your OC, I might give it a read when I have time! Maybe I will learn a thing or two on how to be a good writer?
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I doubt that living while the WWII was around was not all too nice, but who knows? I am happy where I am now, and I will let history be history
7607988 To be honest, you're doing a better job at writing then me.
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I'm sure you are a great writer as well, I just do this to have fun and please people... despite my lack of time to upload with more frequency
Man you had me trolled there in the beginning. I hope that Anon's dream isn't a vision that will come out!
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That was sort of the idea, and who knows? This story does drive away from the canon story a little. Maybe anon can see the future?
I've been reading this story lately and I find it pretty good so far. I like where the characters felt more realistic to the show, that's what draws me to this story.
About your author's note there, I can help you with that. I've read until Chapter 6 and spotted a handful of spelling/grammar mistakes scattered here and there. I'd be willing to help for now.
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Thanks for reading, and I will keep in contact for upcoming chapters/stories if you still want!
It felt short. Also...
Anon, I would have look at her as it wasn't easy to see any emotions from her.
Anyway, still a good chapter. Made me Googled the word 'cretin'. Take your time writing, don't rush it out.
I just started to read it and im really interested in this as the student is never in Crystal Prep but always in CHS. I have read some stories were Sci-Twi mad one friend in all of crystal prep and well im disapointed that those are one-shots and don't showcase more interactionYour's dosent seem to follow Twilight as the main girl but im really into the story, still wished that the other author would expand those stories to be more like this.
Finished all chapters thus far and well i really enjoyed it. Not focusing on Sunset and her friends in this type of senario feels fresh not only that it gives development to characters that need it. Sugarcoat in the last chapter was amazing and i really wish to read more of her history with twilight. The interactions with the shadow bolts are also enjoyable to read and i hope you continue with this story
Still as overused as it may sound i really wish to see Anon with Twilight
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Thanks, and well, that is the idea of Sugarcoat. Having her show emotions is something rare.
Glad I could give you a new word for your dialect ^^
If you ever use itI will try to take my time with the chapters. To be honest, I am not happy with how Chapter 8 turned out in the end, so I will try my best to not make the same mistake again
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Twilight may not be the main focus, but she will be there more often now, even after the friendship games and all... spoiler alert, she will leave Crystal Prep. I may have made a little spin off with this story by adding "you"/anon, but that won't change the main events of the movie
7746067 I got some ideas for a story based on those similar to yours and others. One scene had Anon and Twilight become a couple before Cinch blackmailed Twilight into the games because i wanted a scene of them Kissing and the Cadance barging in and catchig them
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Go for it! Don't let your dreams be dreams! Just do it!
How did Holy inspire you?
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Their stories just inspired me to write my own fics really. No particular reason. I was really doubting if people would like 2nd POV stories and after seeing that their stories got good feedback, I just said "why not" and made my own
Liked how you expanded Sugarcoat's character and not just have the shadowbolts stuck on being raw versions of the mane 6, also dam that Gilda.
Wish Twilight didn't transfer. Also i can understand the whole xenoverse thing as im playing that too
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Oh no, the Shadow 5 may ressemble the Mane 6 in a few aspects, but they are different. The only two that look alike are Sunny and Rarity with their fashion obsession. Another pair is Indigo and Rainbow for their athletic selves, but that is pretty much each. Don't worry, I will dive into each individual girl in the future and multiple times
7758871 Again i Wish there were more stories like this. I only found like 2 or 3 besides this one and they are all one-shots.
Interesting story, hope to see more soon
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Mine ain't gonna be a one shot, be sure of that
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Lots and lots more. You just need to be a little patient
I feel like Anon did the best thing he could do. He may have said a few words, but he may have just said what needed to be said.
Great job man! To be honest with you, this chapter doesn't feel rushed at all. Keep up the good work my friend.
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Sometimes finding the right words can be pretty tricky
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Thanks a lot. I am editing the next chapters before posting them. I wanna make sure you guys get the best I can do and not rush things like I did in the past