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Not much to say, just a guy that likes Video Games, Anime and Ponies.

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Some time after the love spell wackiness in the Crystal Empire, Rumble is trying to adapt to some of the more bigger changes in his life, especially when it comes to his brother's building romance with a certain pony.

Plus other ponies are discussing their friendship with each other, what to do with their growing younger siblings and how to maintain their friendship that they fear is falling apart.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 5 )

The next one should be interesting.

I think you where a little too quick in your writing the story but I did like it the bossy Twilight step mother/Sister in law and Rumble dreads that when it will happen. I like that Spike doesn't get along with Rumble either which help blow things out of proportions I hope there will be a sequel too. I hope the Rumble resist until the bitter end until he finally gives in to her. Keep up the good work.

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Thanks for the critique and the comment, and yes I have a sequel planned, it's pre-written but I still need to edit so it doesn't look too sloppy, hopefully I can have it out soon.

Still following this series very closely.

Spike is a character i hate, but i would admit it, it's a very good boy in this story and i like what you have do to him :moustache:

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