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This story is a sequel to Camping With Rainbow


After years of training and determination, Rainbow Dash has finally achieved her dream. She, along with her husband, Thunderlane, have been accepted into the Wonderbolts, quickly becoming fan favorites. Everything was going exactly as planned, so Rainbow felt unprepared when she received the news that she was pregnant.

Rainbow was certain that this was the end of her career, until Thunderlane offered to resign from the Wonderbolts to take care of their child. This allowed her to remain a Wonderbolt and over time she rose up in the ranks and became second-in-command.

However, the success of her career let her avoid the responsibilities of parenthood. So when Spitfire give her a three month vacation, Rainbow Dash will have to adjust to family, and forced to confront her fears and insecurities about being a mother.

This story takes place after all my other fics, including Come Fly With Me.

Special thanks to Allonso Bronyguy fro doing the cover art and for the editing.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 14 )

That was a great story. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm favoriting this story.

It was a family photo that her husband and son had taken but since she wasn’t around her son held up a picture of her as if she was in the photo too.

If this happened to me, my heart would break in two and i would start crying about how much i avoided spending time with my own son...

I am intreaged by this story, i cant wait to see where this is going!

That was soo Sweet! Thanks for the update. I love it. I'm glad the love is on and Rainbow spent a day with her family. Thanks for a wonderful story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

That was cirtainly interesting... Not what i expected, but i mean that in a good way. I hope that rainbow gets a little bit more comfortable with the whole "living with a family" thing.

Again you have succeded in coming out with another great chapter!

Wow. I just can't help but wonder. Is this the Jealousy that is painting Rainbow's vision or is it real. I can't wait to see how this develops in the future. Great job and thanks for the update.

Im starting to like this story, especially the way you portray the anxiousness and doubt of someone who cant be with their family all the time. Normally I would find this kind of story boring but you somehow caught my interest.

There is... a whole lot of hidden unhappiness here.

With shaky hooves she reached up and grabbed a small box labeled ‘The Rainbow Dash home pregnancy test’. The slogan said ‘Guaranteed to be 20% more accurate’ but in the corner of the box, in small text, it read ‘Not an actual guarantee’.

Why would Thunderlane have a home pregnancy test? :rainbowhuh:
Is there something he's not telling anypony? :trixieshiftright:

6345709 Thunderlane mentions in this chapter that whenever new Rainbow Dash merchandise comes out the companies always send them a free one.

“Yeah, whenever some company makes a new product of you they always send us one for free, so we have all of your merchandise.

Man, i just got to reading this an this is awso... OH NO, THE CHAPTERS OVER!!!
Curses.
This story is fantastic and the more you write, the more i read. Thank you for your controbutions to making reading more enjoyable.

this is an interesting story so far, I am hoping to looking forward to see of this story

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Good story. The update time is concerning though.

I want to see Rainbow speaking to Thunderlane about Cinnamon, and i want Thunderlane to save Applejack just Soarin do it there.
Hope you're still here.

Are you dead? Cause I can help you finish this story if you want.

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