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This story is a sequel to Breakfast with Rainbow


Thunderlane and Rainbow Dash go on a camping trip, where he plans on proposing to her. Unfortunately, Thunderlane has some some problems with the outdoor activities, including an incident where they're attacked by a bear, and he starts to feel insecure about himself. However, he is determined to prove to Rainbow, and to himself, that he's good enough to be her husband.

This is a sequel to Breakfast With Rainbow, but it still happens before Come Fly With Me.

Special thanks to Allonso Bronyguy for the cover art and the edits he did for this fic.

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I'm constantly surprised how these amazing, heartwarming stories of yours seem to not be able to attract much attention. Seriously, this is way better than 70% of the crap I see in the feature box.

This story.....:derpyderp2:
I like it :rainbowdetermined2:

This was very sweet. I would love to see a continuation of the wedding.

You know how much i liked your first story?
I haven't even read this and i have already liked and favorited it.
I love sequels, and i cant wait too see which direction my socks are going to fly after they have been knocked off!

This is possibly the best story i have ever read!

“Oh really, because I always thought that you loved me for my flank,” Rainbow said with smug smile. Thunderlane’s face got even redder as it reminded him of when he was younger and he would constantly write about Dash’s flank in his diary. However, there was no way she’d know about that so her joke was most likely nothing more than a coincidence.

Yeah about that... 😅

“I’m so sorry, I let you down,” Thunderlane kept his eyes to the ground, never looking at Rainbow as he apologized, which meant he couldn’t see her rolling her eyes at this.

Dang do he really beat himself really badly huh

Thunderlane leaned his head down and gave his special somepony a quick kiss on the forehead, then he whispered “For you Dashie, I’d do anything.”

“I was reading through this book the other day so I recognized the berries in your saddlebag and I thought I remembered the book mentioning that they were poisonous.” Thunderlane talked while Rainbow skimmed the page, but it didn’t take her long to see that the berries were indeed poisonous. The cyan mare gave the book back to her special somepony, her face portrayed a mix of fluster and guilt.

Kind of reminds me of that scene from The Campfire tale when Scootaloo told rainbow about the berries being poisoned

“I’m sorry but I’ve got to look at those flowers now too, just to be safe.” Thunderlane spent several minutes inspecting the flowers and flipping through the pages of the book before he turned to his girlfriend and gave her an uneasy stare. He didn’t need to stay anything, she already understood what this meant.

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It was a dark and quiet night, with the main source of illumination coming from the fireflies in the area. Some ponies might have found this a little eerie but to Rainbow, this just made the walk more romantic. No words were exchanged as they walked, instead they let their fanciful eyes and the occasional blush do the talking for them. With everything that had happened today and the night before, this romantic moment felt like a much needed breath of fresh air for the cyan pegasus.

“I just want to practice a bit for when I have to carry you over the threshold,” Thunderlane explained with a sheepish grin. Rainbow gave him a playful smirk and a raised eyebrow but she eventually rested her head against his chest and wrapped her forehooves around his neck. She closed her eyes so she could get even more enjoyment from this tender moment as her fiance flew her back to their campsite.

Oh my gosh I think that's one of the most adorable site and not only that showing Rainbow how much she trusted him so much

Oh wow this was a pretty nice story I really like that seeing how the couples really care for each other and not only that during the camp of course there will always be ups and downs and every step especially a bear almost going to kill them but still Thunder Lane really have his ego really hurt badly he really wanted to prove to Rainbow that he can do this but the rainbow he didn't need to sure we make mistakes but it doesn't mean she doesn't love him she only loves him for who he is loving caring guy and she admitted it took her this long to realize that and she felt ashamed about that but Thunder Lane didn't take it too personal either right now the most important thing they have each other and I really did like the proposal even though it wasn't perfect in his head but that was pretty crazy but yet romantically and rainbow really truly cares for him so much and when she said yes he was the most happiest Pony in the world I really like this story keep up the good work

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