Loli is a loud and proud batpony with a love for music, fashion, and all things scary. She doesn't let what other people think of her bother her and is pretty happy with who she is. But she's never had a crush on anypony and the feeling takes her by surprise in more ways than one. So, how does she deal with this new feeling?
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No really? How? She's apparently clueless!
Hey!
Written for Bat Ponies and Thestrals: Stories of the Night 2nd Annual Writing Competition
This was good!
7689241 Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.
ohhh... was this a single chapter story? because I would LOVE to see more of this~
7691950 Would you, now?
Yes, I definitely would like to see more from this.. are you going to be
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7692697 I might consider it. Not sure if it will be a sequel or a just more chapters, but I'm sure it'll be better than this.
This fic reminded me of how heavy horses actually are.
7697198 And how powerful their kicks are.
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I agree this was good. I would love to see more of this story. But for a great story it gets a fav.
7697582 I'm glad you like it. And if y'all wanna see more, I might look into investing some time in a sequel.
Good looking forward to it
7697929 did they kiss?
7725435 Mhm. Really wanted to hold out on that part, but my brain forgot to do so as I finished this at about 3am.
first off: SHIP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Also i need more please it is soooo good.
7802687 Glad you enjoyed it. I've considered making a sequel considering this went way better than I expected. Comment's like these, I may just be obligated to do so.