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Warning: The following story is currently unedited and contains some M/M shipping. If you don't like one or both of these, you know where the exit button is. This is an experimental piece that I'm working with.
Prince Blueblood's newest guards want to humiliate the Prince at the gala by slipping a love poison in his drink. After he consumed it, the Prince spontaneously falls in love with the first pony he sees. Unfortunately, it's Spike the Dragon.
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You're acting like a little girl, prince.
Don't believe me?
Ne général, je ne suis pas un grand amateur de couplage de Spitke, care que je le trouve trop immature et qu'il m'a jamais épaté comme personnage principal, surtout pour du couplage. Quand-même je suis bien curieux de voir ce que ça va donné comme histoire. J'ai beaucoup tout les histoire où Blueblood est le personnage principal, surtout quand il accoste avec Twilight.
S'il te plais continue cette histoire.
Oh boy...here we go.
...... huh...... on one hand I like it..... but on the other hand...... why not do a Blueblood M/M Romance fic with one of his guards or..... you know, anyone except Spike?
7655214 This is only a set up to the humor that is about to happen. Being under the influence of the love poison, even I'm curious to see where this will go where Spike isn't affected by the potion.
Love poison.
Spike didn't drink any
tuft of cloud
Rainbows glow
Pegasus feather mixed fast not slow
Served to two not in the know
PLOT HOLE
7655320
Not quite, that's the whole idea. What would happen if only one pony drinks it, but the other hasn't?
7655340
nothing the spells not complete , Happy Hearts and Hooves Day
I feel so sad for Spike. The rumors are going to haunt him.
The pink mare shrugged, “What can I say? You can learn a lot when you’re at the bottom of the ocean with a pineapple. But what about you?” she nudged him. “Being your first time at the gala, what do ya think?”
Spike has been at the gala at least once before along with the mane 6.
7660120 Luckily for me, that's an easy fix.
Wait a sec... (After rewatching "Best Night Ever" and "Make New Friends but Keep Discord" later...) Spike was with the mane six, but at the "Best Night,"he didn't get to spend any time at the gala himself since the rest were occupied with other things. And with the "Make Friends," episode, I don't think I've seen Spike once at that party.
7660183 He was there though.
7660366 Which scene? I'm not dismissing you, but I just wanna make sure on something I might have overlooked.
7660368 The episode name escapes me but if you want, I can guide you to a pmv that had a scene of Spike at the gala toward the end.
7660473 That would help to back up with what you say.
7660582 https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=MDHCSmVMZz0
I hope that link works. If not, look for a pmv by rainbowslashLP to the song 'unity'.
7660747 (Putting on the Sherlock outfit). *Clearing voice for a British accent.* While you're evidence was compelling at first, I've taken a closer look at the very end of that clip where the mane six and Spike were in Canterlot and concluded that what you thought was taken place at the gala was misleading. Judging by the clothing I assumed that it was from the earlier seasons. But after quickly reviewing "Best Night Ever," I've come to a realization: The clothing on the mane six did not match up with the dresses at the first viewing of the gala. That's when I've noticed the flowers they were wearing on their heads. I knew I've seen them before, but it was for a different occasion. Seeing that at that point in time in that little clip where Twilight isn't an alicorn yet, I've deduced that such an event must have taken place before season 4. And the only time there was a major even in Canterlot, was the wedding. Since in that clip too that the colors indicated it was around night time, there could be only one scene in which that clip came from.
(Skip to around the four minute mark.)
(Side note: in forcing me to go back on those episodes, I have found a little detail about Spike that I have forgotten about. I wanna thank you for that. Also, since I'm taking a break from that Beethoven story, I think I'm gonna work on this once I get caught up with homework.)
7660805 damn it.
7662182 No, it's alright. By looking back on these episodes, they've given me a few ideas here and there. Still, thank you.
7662189 I guess you're welcome then!
I just died from laughter. You know which line was the funny one. Great job.
Punt!
still a lot of fun to read.
How long before everything falls apart? I don't know, but it'll be fun to read
Oh look, I found an interesting typo:
In the back of his head, Spike heard an army of angles singing at what he saw in that secret room.
Angles....
So Blueblood's a geek?
...I'm cool with that!
Also Twiliy's just peeved because this little spectacle interrupted her "alone time" with the Flash Sentry.
and the reason they didn't even try to explain the love potion to Spike is because... tension?
7671988 And thank you for giving me an idea for the next chapter.
7672006 You're welcome; it was just the first thing I thought of, since I'm pretty sure he knew about the potion from the CMC incident
7672024 Obviously Spike knows something is up, and the Guards are trying to get into less trouble then they already are.
Besides, I've already thought out a punishment for those two.
7672027 Obviously... though I assume he's going to smack himself for not putting the pieces together sooner, and then give the two of them a lecture before saying to blueblood that he's going to give him a test of his love: if he can stay away from him for 1 hour, then he'll acknowledge his love as true or something like that
but that's just the very first thing that came to my mind when I first looked at the story
“Sir Spike, did I given you your first kiss?”
You mean 'give'. Loving the story so far!
7672785 fixed and thanks.
Wow. That was an epic ending.
HA!
It's a guy thing,,,
Is this the ending? I'm almost disappointed. Don't get me wrong, the punishment was perfect and all, but I'm still somewhat unsatisfied with Spike and Blueys relationship.
I have to say, this was quite a nice little story! Spike and Blueblood are both very underused in M/M stories, and seeing them in this sort of scenario was not only interesting, but fairly believable. Blueblood was shown in a very likable light, while also keeping him close to how I'd see him as a character. And Spike went about this in a realistic and intelligent way, which I like. Overall, I can definitely say I liked this story. It might need to be looked over for some small spelling errors, but nothing too distracting. It's a good M/M fic, and I approve.
I was a great story I alway like mind altering stories where the altering of the sexual orientation of the a characters, even doe it wasn't exactly the case here, still it was a good fun to read.
7667388 Non angli, sed angeli.
7704464 One translation later... Oh, I'll fix that.
As soon as Spike said he had an idea for a punishment for those guards, I knew what was going to happen.
So, are those two still going to get court-martialed after their mess is cleaned up?
7704471
I think you mean uncomfortable.
8282045
Fixed and thanks.
I came upon this yesterday when at the dance section with spike and blueblood...in strange reversal way.
0.32 - 5.49
https://youtu.be/U7Hx7XgJ1IQ
p.s: it's a musical based on War & peace by writer of Anna Karenina(I forgot his name.) if you're wondering!
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