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Rainbow Dash uncovers the difference between simply being alive, and truly living.


Special thanks to Alicorn Priest and NotATree.

Cover art courtesy of Mewball on deviantART.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 12 )

nice. VERY impressive, this deserves the feature box.:moustache:

I. Can't. stop. crying!!! :fluttercry::raritycry:

Very nice. Short, sweet, and absolutely lovely to read. You gun good on this one.

It's a great story, but...
That was it?
Was that really it?

The ending somehow felt really...hanging...lacking...

Are we - the readers - , suppose to draw our own ending from this story?

Regardless, great story. :pinkiehappy:

Yea, I kinda agree with destined there. It does seem to end too soon. But, I've done the same thing with stories I've written, so I understand it. Very nicely done.

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Such high praise! Thanks :twilightsmile:

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Much thanks for your input. I've decided to write an epilogue, which I will post in the next few days.

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Rightous. I look forward to seeing it posted!

A beautiful epilogue to an awesome little story. :rainbowkiss: There aren't many stories that can give me that warm and tingly feeling inside, but this one pulled it off. Well done!

Oh... my chest... strange feeling... this is... beautiful!:raritystarry:

Very nice finisher. I like it.

i'm not sure i really get the story, so now what happened?:rainbowhuh:

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