The gift of immortality may be appealing for those who only know a mortal life, but to the immortal it can be a curse as they are forced to distance themselves from the world around them to avoid the pain of loss.
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Would you consider proofing my 2nd chapter, I don't do google docs, prefer e-mail. My OC is a techinically a baby, and she won't appear for many chapters in the future. She had to get born and that is a spolier from the partial chapter I developed for her to resolve an issue in a previous chapter that has to happen. That issue will resolve the whole story so the Oc will not appear until the very end. Flutter Ponies pre-date this whole TV show so they are not original anything...
Can you please pre-read what I have so far of my chapter 4
i would treat the mind like any other a room full of doors that can lead to memories, thoughts, feelings and even other rooms with more doors, minds are confusing they are not simple and a immortal imo would just have more doors for feelings and the like
or you can use that walking thing they did at the end of season 3
i would also think that Luna would see that they are closer in mind then one would think, they both have regrets they both have been lonely
just some ideas to help you out, it is a very good story so i look forward to more :)
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>>354934354934 Dead in the water because I can't find a good way explain the inner workings of an immortals mind. I've tried so many different ways: Glass hallways that lead forward and backward infinitely, A cave with a thousand pools, a black expanse of void. Nothing has felt quite right, and don't get me started on how Luna's perception would change things. It's been a while since I last tried to write the next chapter. I'm just not sure how it should go. I know what happens next, and how I want the story to end. I just haven't found the right path to get to the next step.
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How is your next chapter of Sleepless Eternity coming up?
I haz been followed by a tree......... I've had worse.