This story is a sequel to A Different Sunset
Ever wondered how Twilight became a chaos sorcerer? About what happened to so many ponies before the start of this series and their origins? Look no further then here. 'What Happened' will be a series of short stories that will detail the backstories of some of your more familiar characters.
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Well, that was... random, which befits a Pinkie story I guess. Looking forward to see what else this all illuminates, but I'm betting that Chaos Sparkle's story is going to be even more random and fun. CHAOS!
Also, just for fun, the first time I'm ever first of the first's for a story. So, FIRST!
The cover art was a dead giveaway :3
Excellent job on this short story. The exchanges, emotional content, characterizations and general wrap-up in this origin story concerning Pinkie's becoming a Changeling are quite well done. I'm definitely going to look forward to seeing the other origin stories as soon as time and inspiration will allow; not just for this universe's counterparts to the rest of the canon Mane Six, but also other characters as well. I'm particularly curious about this universe's Starlight and Mina.
Great work on this story. Full of the Shimmerverse's usual comedy. The ending was brilliant
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Interesting, I had thought Pinkie was actually born a changling in this world.
7606250 It was a thought I was going to do originally, but since I wanted to keep the other members of her family ponies and this idea felt the more humorous of them, I couldn't pass this one up.
I believe you're looking for 'fainted'
Unless she feinted in fainting, and is just waiting for an opportunity to strike. Ponies are tricky like that.
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The best part is the accent. Please use it more often.
I liked it, good short.
Not much I can say other than, great job on this short story. I LOVED the exchanges, emotional content, action and wrap-up in all the right places. I particularly liked the Wonderbolts' interactions with filly Rainbow (ESPECIALLY after the Sonic Rainboom). I'm definitely curious as to how your universe's Starlight ended up becoming the personal student of the female leader of the Minotaurs (I think I remember that from one of your journal entries, but I can't remember the female leader's name) and ended up meeting Mina as to how Spike managed to - help Moondancer come that far out of her shell , but I know those are stories for another time (obviously after the rest of the canon Mane Six's origin stories, but how much later remains to be seen). At any rate, I will definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
Nice little chapter.
Rainbow Blaze,.
I thing I notice something, from what I read in this chapter and this line from
A Different Sunset,
I take it Cloudsdale isn't as peaceful as it is in the show.
Aww. :-C _ _ _ _ Excellent chapter, but I really feel sorry for both Twilights concerning their future loss. :-C _ _ _ _ The exchanges, emotional content, action and future chapter set-up were all well done in all the right places. Of course we know how things are going to turn out, but at least Night Light managed to get an awesome Papa Wolf moment there before things REALLY turn out for the worse. At any rate, I AM looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
oh snap.
Talk about ending on a wham, Good work. I have a two questions.
What the heck was that creature that can out of the portal?
Second, Why did the Human Romans try to exterminate the Troodon?
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1: random chaos daemon. Twilight opened up a portal to the realm of chaos
2: Because they viewed them as monsters and they wanted their land. Humans, at least back then, were very anti... anything not human. It's sort of mellowed out in more recent times, but it's still there.
7758301 Thank you for the answer
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Um.............what. just. happened?
Very little I can say except that this chapter might have taken a while, but was well worth the wait. I LOVED the chat between Twi and Celestia. It was quite appropriately emotional.
At any rate, I WILL be looking forward to more, but will also be quite willing to be patient.
This was sweet... and a little heartbreaking
Excellent work as always mate. I'm looking forward to a Rarity chapter, and how she became Alpha of the Diamond Dogs.
This made me teary-eyed.
That explains it, I can't wait to see her in the main shimmerverse series!!!!
OK so rainbow has a military ancestry and is now a trainee for the wonderbolts so military future.
Can't wait for the next chapter.