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Eh. Get a track.
MIND CONTROL JIZZ!!
I'll hand it to ya, I typically don't care for fetish fics (hypocrit, since I've basically written one) but I kind of liked this because of the concept, and it's fairly well written. Just a Stallion that can rape and mind control whoever he pleases.
When do we get to Celestia?
Go rainbow dash. Interesting enough the mind control was different between the two mares. The mayor was acting like a slave while Fluttershy was still herself.
7587296 That's because the mayor consumed his cum, but Fluttershy hasn't yet. I might go back and try and make that clearer.
Sorry about my first post. Computer's acting up.
Nice story and I wonder what's going to happen once Domino gets control over both Fluttershy and Rainbow
This is really good! I'm actually impressed with how good this is.
(Also as for things to do could you do something with feet? o3o)
I'm sorry, but this is very unoriginal concept wise. Besides that, rape is a terrible thing to happen, not something you want to base a story on. Good luck in your future writing endeavors.
Ho, The classics..
~ 
Cautiously watching. I'm not a fan of instant control, and the way it's used here is a reason, but we'll see.
Great make more chapters
I like the looks of this. Keep it up even with the nice darkish stuff.
A corruption story? I'm interested to see where this goes!
It'd be fun if all the mane six were secretly into being controlled
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7593211 That would make it way to easy
whens the next chapter coming out?
7607645 I'm a slow writer, but hopefully within a week
7608798 fair enough
Aww shit! Twilight better watch out! Not that she knows what for.
Great so far!
Loving the story! I'd be willing to be your Editor if you still need one! I have written and edited a few of my stories, though I'm much better at editing other people's works than I am at editing my own. Just let me know and PM me the necessary information! If you would like to use my FREE services I can PM you my email as well.
Loving this! Please don't stop!
Next target should Applejack and I wonder what he's going to do when he comes across Pinkie?
I usually don't like the instant mind control stories where the character has overpowered control, but for some reason your story still does a REALLY good job with it!
Keep it up!
...He's gonna put his spunk in the perfume bottle, isn't he? That magnificent, sly, clever, conniving bastard!
I'm hyped
I really, very want Domino to succeed in gaining control of all of the Mane 6.
Will now domino
I really like the story can't wait for the next update
I hope this isn't the end we of Spike in this story, I want to see him again after claiming Zecora and making a complete gender-swap potion.
7704654 ooh that's a cool idea!!
Also
one last edit I almost missed pal!
7704762 No, you didn't miss that, I introduced while I was making your corrections.
And yeah, Zecora's hot, as are potions, but I'm not sure how I can fit her into the narrative.
7704803 When(after) claiming Applejack gain control of Big Mac and work Zecora in from him?
7704803
For Zecora you could have her work on a potion for Alicorns. Like she uses his jizz and different things. You could also have a paralysis potion on one of them like Pinkie.
Well, that was nice of Domino.
7704803 I'm sure we brainstorm something together..
Two chapters in and you've already checked off almost my entire kink list... I can tell that this'll be something special when it's done.
PS: You actually have a pretty great writing style, light on details and word diversity, sure, but it feels like it was written by the impatient over-powered main character, and that's commendable.
I wonder if Domino will do more of his "shipping". Spike now owning Rarity is already nice; there are more than enough mares and fillies to go around for every guy in town.
anymore ?
Well that didn't go to plan did it
Well, Applejack can be a wonderful help for him. After all, who would reject a drink from Sweet Apple Acres?
Plus, Mac and Applejack together can overpower Starlight if she doesn't expect it. As soon as one of Big Mac's meaty hands is on Starlight's horn, he only needs to yank it about to stop her from casting. And Mac and AJ are perhaps still a little pissed at how Starlight used magic on him to turn him into a chatterbox against his will. Becoming Mac's sex toy should be appropriate punishment.
My, my. Seems like he forgot about Starlight. But that will be only a minor bump in the road if he manages to corrupt Applejack. Then he will have quite the support gathered together against the remaining three!
7905224 c:
7587657 It was incredibly obvios this was a rape story so why exacly are youu commenting about it. Saying something about how fast it is happening is one thing but just because rape is involved is way worse
As far as I can see there are quite a few peole reading this that don't like the instant mnd control concept but like the story anyway. In my opinion I think you make up for their dislke with two things.
1. The consent that hapens when he cums into a someone.
2. His personality.
(Explanation for #2): He desires control but is not how many people would consider someone like king Sombra being. Also he does not abuse either of them and lets them enjoy themselves.
those are my thoughts on it anyway.
that sonds lke pretty good idea to me. I vote for that.
This is never gonna be finished is it?
Yes, an update!!!
No, hiatus. :(