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goldenrise365


I am a brony who likes to draw and write.

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When the son of Maximillion Pegasus, Golden Rise, comes to Canterlot, things start to turn strange. When the girls turn to Gold as the cost, his two old friends step in to prove he is not the source. But instead something goes wrong, and the true source is revealed.

Old and new friends come together to stop this new threat.

This is my first story, so hope you like it.

Yu-Gi-Oh belongs to Konami
Thanks to blueswhitedragon0 and fluttershyzone for letting me use their ocs.

Now, its time to rise to the occasion.

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 45 )

Epic start to what I can tell is going to be an awesome story!

that was a sweet duel:rainbowwild:
That it was Star:ajsmug:

Nice duel! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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You didn't notice what I did?

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I noticed. And I love it!

7648727 I love this to keep up the good work can't wait to see the next chapter

I love it and Love the duel and now I'm in suspense on with the ending on how gold ended up like that And will he be able to win with just 10 life points

THAT WAS AWESOME! Can't wait to see what's next!

Love this Chapter!... and oh no Gold! What's going on how dis this happen it's now More worst then before!..

Next Time the ultimate duel with the ultimate comeback of duel History!

Six millennium items down, one to go!

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Actually it's 7 with one to go.

7661756 just a little quick question... somepoint there will be some romance between sonata and Ace right along with some romance between Thunder and starlight when It gets to those points right

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But of coarse. Although with darkness on the horizon, some moments may interrupted.

7661926 yay and true the darkness is still roaming around still but it will be stop!

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Yeah he's not having the best of days. Also his secrets is revealed.

"Is this the part where one of us faints?" asked Pinkie.

Lol gravity falls reference

Love this so much and love gold past.. now next up the Tournament

Ace:alll yeah now it's tournament time!

Shadow Thunder:you got that right it's going to be awesome!


Me:You both do your best and have fun

Ace:we will and with my partner Dark Magician Girl and along with Tiamus we will do are best


Shadow Thunder:looks like someone is putting on a brave face his girlfriend sonata..,


Ace:*blushes* b-Be quite!

Shadow Thunder:*laughs slightly


Me: your the one to talk Shadow Thunder... wouldn't you put a brace face for your girlfriend Starlight


Shadow Thunder:b-Be quite *blushes


Ace:*laughs slightly*


Shadow Thunder:oh be quiet ace



Me:*cant help but laugh* ok you two enough is enough you both have fun... and make sure you think of a way to tell your special girls how much they mean to you

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I think Gold can help with that. Two words: custom cards.

Comment posted by goldenrise365 deleted Nov 2nd, 2016

Loved it!... and oh boy that wasn't the real Gold!.. this will probably end badly

Are you going to skip over the duels, or will we actually get to see them?

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For day 2 probably, but major duels no.

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This just keeps getting better! Can't wait to see what else you can whip up!

Love this I have to say each chapter after another is getting better and better and I'm excited to see what's going to happen next

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Why thank you both. Now the finale battle will be for both worlds.

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And Burst isn't the only one with two girlfriends.

7700458 Love both chapters! I can't wait to see the next one in the ultimate battle!

This chapter was amazing!.... at what is the other part of the Prophecy? Looks like I'm waiting to see what it is in the next chapter

7701158 oooooooo can't wait to see the next chapter

I love this! Can't wait to see how gold returned in the one story and can't wait for season 2! I'm looking forward for them both

"Not quite Beserk. By changing my Maiden to attack mode I can negate your card's effect and special summon one Blue-Eyes White Dragon."

She actually doesn't do that.
Her first effect negates attacks.
But her second effect doesn't negate card effects and it needs to be a targeting effect to trigger.

"You see Giant is unaffected by your monsters' effects until after the battle phase, and he can attack both of your monsters while inflicting piercing battle damage on defense monsters."

Its effect actually is it just stops monster effects from activating as all DURING the Battle Phase only.
And since it didn't seem like it was the Battle Phase when DMGTDK tried to use her effect, her effect should have destroyed Chaos Giant.

After fully reading this, I want to ask a few things.

Where was Spike during all of this? He was completely absent and missed out on all of this.
Why wasn't he with Sci-Twi there? Wished he got to duel honestly..

What happened to Princess Luna and Equestrian Spike when Equestria got taken over by Shadow Master there?
Is.. Chrysalis dead as well.?

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