Get costume together? Check.
Go to convention? Check.
Be sent to Equestria? Wait... What?
Save one of the princesses? Huh?
End up being the hero of Equestria? That was not on the list.
Let's just say, don't buy anything from the person that calls themselves The Merchant.
This story will have aliens from all seasons of Ben 10.
It's hero time!
7810761
Oh yeah
this is the 3rd or fourth omnimatrix displaces i have seen i think you forgot the human tag too.
oh hey anothe ben 10 story
7810776
Thank you for the notice. I fixed it.
7810777
Good to see another Ben 10 fan. Like your story by the way.
7810783 thank you we should crossover sometime
7810783 I'm always up for a crossover
Very interesting. I have actually been considering doing something like this myself.
I understand Ben being all chill about this whole mess, but seriously!? Sunset is all like "oh look, somebody who can change into a freezing ghost, a dinosaur, and my father. Nifty!" Needless to say pacing is something that's lacking. *Sigh* you're lucky I like Ben 10.
I will, however, track this story. Maybe I'll be surprised! One track, and one like!
7810761 we, my friend are definitely multiple similtaneous types of nerds! We are eerily similar! It would be do weird if we lived in the same city too! Probably not the same country though. Canada.
Nice to see a change from yugioh 24/7!
7810888
USA for me.
7810900 dang. But hey! Maybe just like there's equestrian counterparts in the mlp world, you're my USA counterpart?
7810906 because we're like identical mindwise.
7810906
Well I'm into star wars, Godzilla, power rangers, transformers, and yugioh. So...I guess?
7810912 it's a possibility!
Yes I'm very weird. I should be scanned by the omnitrix.
The pacing is very poor, a few minor spelling mistakes here and there, but the concept is one of my favourites. Plus I'm a huge Ben 10 fan. Tracked and liked.
Intresting start Track and a like for a start.
Big fan of Ben 10, I whould like to do a cross with you sometimes(Zidane, Final Fantay 9) if you want that is.
Mary Sue fic huh? Have a down-vote on the house.
7810811
Don't stop yourself. Just let your ideas flow.
I swear these HiE fics are getting lazier and lazier.
This is a message for everyone.
If you wish to do a collaborative with me, please PM me.
And to those that think this story isn't worth being written, there are many other stories out there. You don't have to trash one story to make others feel terrible. Some stories aren't for everyone and that's ok. Just read what you like and stay positive. I hope this message gets out to all of you.
Changes will be made in the future. If anyone wishes to be an editor, please PM me. Thank you.
7811599 Wow. I've never gotten that reply before, so thanks!
Am I the only person who saw the word "Omninexes" and thought this was going to be a story where the people you used to date were everywhere?
Needs Horror tag.
7812146
May I ask why?
7812392
You put all your failed dates in one small area and see how long it takes you to start screaming.
7812395
Huh?
7811820
Your welcome. Always happy to help inspire someone.
7812771 Yeah, thanks!
so... the first chapter never happened?
7816878 apparently
7816878 Probably was meant to be a "It happened in his mind, how cool would it be if it actually happened that way?" sort of deal.
Great chapter my friend and keep uploading more chapters for this I'll be waiting my friend
7816971
Yes. It went from a happy experience to "Well this stinks." The rest of the story will continue from here.
This is an interesting start...
Oooookay...that confused me at first. Still, not that bad
-Dark
This story is both confusing and good
7821330
Thanks can you explain why it's confusing.
7824309 Sombra and Nightmare Moon ooc and Sunset being the princess of friendship. That's all really it's kinda cool
7824639
I decided to flip the script, change some things.
7825192 That makes it interesting also how many times do you plan to have Vilgax get his ass kicked
7825238
I say about half the time he appeared. The other half will be ties or wins.
7828726 Sounds about right knowing Vilgax hey I got a question for the last encounter can you have way big throw him into space that would be hilarious
7828762
I am going to have way big in one of the fights, but not the final one
7820393
What really confused you? If it was the start, it was like paradise vs reality.
7831563 Yeah, I found that out by the end and the comments
-Dark
A fast paced story... I don't even mind that is a displaced story.
7846644
Do you like it.
7847911 i dunno, but I'm interested.