Silver Lining is just your average pony, until one day he becomes interested in visiting a underground fight club that his best friend, Lightning Blitz competes in. After being there, and becoming interested in fighting as well, things start changing in Silver's life, as well as the two's friendship.
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Interesting concept. Good work for a first fic. I shall watch with interest. Go into more detail about the fighting if you can in later chapters.
well. . . .to start with (where are any of the mane/side ponys? >
second it was pretty well laid out. but u need to work on snatching the adience by the face and holding them
good detail and visuization.
and maybe try to spin up the suspence a lil
-Crimson
My plans are to have a lot better fights from here on out. I knew that was one little issue that I should have corrected before I posted it.
Also Crimson, if you read the character tags, the only one there (For now) is OC.
But, thanks for the opinions.