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Why doesn't this story have a dark tag?
Fantastic! I take it you saw dimwitdog'so art?
Sooooo. Celestia sets up her sister to be raped? Ya...not buying it.
Also this was fairly pedestrian. Nothing really outstanding in either plot or clop. And all this noise about luna being a super awesome warrior and she succumbs that easily to another?
I'm just not feeling it.
7533434 Yeah, I added one just cause.
7533580 Yeah, that's exactly where I got this idea from.
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Yeah, that's fair I supppose. I mean, that would never really happen as far as the characters are concerned.
The idea of this is that she was drugged by someone she trusted. After she was drugged there really was much she could do to fight.
So, based on Flurry, is this Elite Guard going to be at least partiallh made up of alicorns?
Also, how long until Celestia decides she wants more than ~1 potential guard member per year, and decides go get Twilight involved too? Sequel?!
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Nah, probably not. I Like the idea of them being demi-god while being an alicorn should be reserved for full god status. The demi-god ponies would live longer, be stronger, harder to kill, etc.
Hmm, that is an idea that I like. Twilight would definitely be less enthusiastic about it. In this story Luna outwardly enjoys it after a bit but with Twilight I guess I could make it that she would hate and love it at the same time...
Not sure if the who should have an apostrophe s. Pretty sure that makes it "who is".
I have a concept for an potential sequel:
Like I said, just an concept, so it's horrible written and a crime against the rules of good writing.
(But still the best story I wrote to date).
Of course it doesn't have to be with Twilight, any other 'male' should to.
(Including Twilight was partly inspred by this comment over here: 7537029 )
If someone against all odds uses this please give me a note.
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I'll be honest, I'm into a lot of weird things but futa is not one of them. I don't think I'll be continuing with this setting of princesses getting forcibly impregnated. This story was really just to test things out.
After a long 2 terms in university I have finally started writing a new story, and it's nearly finished. It's anthro this time. It involves Rarity being a big sister and teaching Button Mash and Sweetie Belle about sex.